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A jam submission

Mission: UncontrollableView game page

A puzzle-platformer where your character is "out of control"!
Submitted by Blue-Dreamer (@AliMMoayed1) — 11 minutes, 46 seconds before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Fun#4033.6473.647
Overall#8343.4313.431
Originality#12033.4513.451
Presentation#17043.1763.176

Ranked from 51 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

How does your game fit the theme?
It's a puzzle-platformer where your character is "out of control" but not "Chaotic"! (Please check game's page before playing to get informed about instructions and bugs)

Did your team create the art for this game during the 48 hour time slot?

Yes

We created all art during the game jam

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Submitted(+1)

The concept for this game is really good! Moving platforms around and trying to rig it so that the tank does what you want has a lot of potential!

Game definitely does need more polish though, such as sound and effect for feedback. It can also get somewhat tedious failing some of the longer levels and needing to retread through most of it again.

Developer

Thanks for your comment :)
I wish I had time to polish it :(

Submitted(+1)

nice game! very well executed given the time crunch! seems like there is a lot of potential to further development on this title :)

Developer(+1)

I'm glad you liked it :)

I love what I made and I'm surly going to work more on it.

Thanks for your comment <3

Submitted(+1)

The concept behind it is pretty nice and solid, with some polishing and a bit more work on it it would become very good indeed.

Developer

Thanks for your comment :)

I wish I had time to polish it :(

Submitted(+1)

This game has fantastic level design! There is a lot of potential to expand the core levels here, and I'd love to see a more polished and elaborate puzzle adventure! Good job.

Developer(+1)

I'll definitely try my best to make a full game out of it. If you wanted to, you can follow me to get informed when I release an update ;)

Thank you for your comment and I'm glad you liked it :)

Submitted(+1)

very cool game and GG for the level design !

Developer

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it :)

Submitted(+1)

What an underrated game, love this use of the theme and I think the mechanics + puzzles are super well executed. If this had some more juice/polish it'd be perfect. Really impressive stuff!

Developer

I'm glad you liked it that much <3

And yeah, I wish I had time to add more juice and polish :(

Thank  you for your comment :)

(+1)

That was a classic idea but really well executed - given the 48hr limit there's no point saying it could add some juice etc because the design and concept is fab 

Developer(+1)

Thank you so much for playing my game <3

I wish I could do some polish but I was getting bugs that I didn't even know they could exist :(

BTW, I'm glad  you liked it that much :)

Submitted(+1)

Some very nice mechanics in place here! I like all the different features like moving platforms, keeping away from chaos, which many other games have, reducing the rage in other games! The art was well thought out too!

Developer

Thank you so much for your comment <3

I'm glad you liked it :)

Submitted(+1)

Another lemmings type game to the jam, and these are hard to make work. Id say you have a decent amount of mechanics in place to make interesting puzzles, though some problems (like the very precise physics for launching the tank up) can make it very tedious. Would have been nice to see the game come with music and SFX, as there's no mood to it right now. Otherwise, it's a cool game.

Developer

Thanks for your comment :)

I wish I had more time to polish and add sound :(

Submitted(+1)

The idea is not the brand-new one, but who said it should be?) Because your execution is impressive. I hope more people will be able to appreciate your game, its puzzles and the overall style is satisfying and captivating for sure.I also like how intuitive the game is, and I believe that you might consider keep up with the game, polishing and adding more levels. It really is a good concept 

Developer(+1)

I'm glad you liked it :)

I really love what I made, and I'll surly work more on it to make a full game.

Also if you're interested, you can follow me to get informed when I release an update in future <3

Submitted(+1)

Great game! I liked the combination of skill and problem solving. Well done!

I would appreciate it if you'll have time to check out my game.

Developer

I'm glad you liked it.

I played, rated and commented your game as well :)

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Developer

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it :)

Submitted(+1)

Although I've seen similar entries with your idea, playing your game was addicting! I definitely had a lot of fun playing it :)

Developer

Thanks for playing. I'm really happy you liked it that much :)

Submitted(+1)

The physics feels right.

Developer

Thanks :)

I spent more than a day to make physics feel right.

(+1)

I love the puzzles, the difficulty is very well balanced, but it's a little bit difficult sometimes to get the secret collectibles. I would have liked to see more bug corrections in the post jam update (like when the robot disappears, or you can limit the yellow platforms velocity, or an auto restart of the level) but the game is great, especially considering that it has been made in only 2 days

Developer(+1)

Thanks for your comment, I'm glad you liked it :)

I didn't want the 'majorbugsfixed' version to be so different. I thought there is a chance that my buggy game could get ignored :)

And yes you're completely right about the problems, and it wasn't actually 2 days for me, I had a final exam for my university at the second day of game jam and it took me lots of time :)

Submitted(+1)

Really nice puzzle game with well designed levels and lots of cool concepts. I think that the difficulty of the puzzles were just right so each of them felt challenging but not too difficult. There were a few bugs and issues such as the fact that when you complete the level you have to manually go to the menu which makes it seem like you haven't really achieved anything. It would have probably been nicer to progress through the levels rather than be able to play them all at the start, but this is a very small issue. The physics of throwing up the tank on a platform was a bit janky and I think it should probably be removed all together since it was almost impossible to control. The tank should probably just move left and right. However, overall the game was really well designed and I enjoyed playing it a lot, great job!

Developer(+1)

Thanks for your detailed comment, I'm glad you liked it :)

I wish I could fix those problems before deadline. I actually made the main menu in 15 minutes :) and my game got uploaded like 30 secs before deadline.

I put a 'majorbugsfixed' version of my game and it's completely the same game but with less bugs, so you can try it for better experience.

(+1)

Loved the idea and the levels are very neatly designed!

didn't like that the character would just disappear if you squash it by mistake but I guess with some polishing and less frustrating elements (*cough* green panels *cough*) this would be a puzzle I'd happily spend hours on to solve!

Developer(+1)

Thanks. I'm glad you liked  it.

I actually didn't have time to polish the game and it's the best thing I could make when I'm drowned in weird bugs :)

(+1)

wow!

what a cool idea

I love this game

Developer

I'm glad you liked it :)

Submitted(+2)

I love the idea behind this. The gif showing a later level seems really cool. I see that there are some good physics running to go along with it, and the sprite work is good. Unfortunately, and I recognize that you only had a little while to make the game, but I didn't really understand what to do. It was hard to exit the game, and the character wandered offscreen on the first "level" and didn't ever come back. I don't know if it was supposed to do that? The objective of the game was also unclear.


It definitely fits the theme of the challenge, and the idea is awesome.

Developer(+1)

Thanks for trying my game.

The submitted version of this game has some critical bugs that my prevent you from progressing at some points.

There was a time when I had to decide between fixing bugs and adding secret areas to the game, it's somehow my first jam and it seems I made a mistake by choosing to add secrets to game. Even those secrets have bug :)

I fixed those critical bugs and put the fixed version on game's page. It's completely the same game submitted here and if it counts as cheating, then you can use "R for reset" and "Backspace for menu"  in submitted version when you can't progress anymore.

And no, you are supposed to go to main menu after you finish the level, so you can consider yourself as winner when you go out of bounds and return to main menu manually by pressing 'Backspace' :)

Hope you play it again and thanks for your comment.

Developer(+1)

Please check the game's page.

I put builds for other platforms there.

Hope you like this game :)

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