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Need feedback on my game - I'll play your games in return.

A topic by MonishVyas created Sep 01, 2019 Views: 282 Replies: 68
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https://monishvyas.itch.io/room-escape

Here  is my game guys it's a text based adventure game. I feel like I have not shared much information of how you can play so I feel like almost everyone will try a few commands and will eventually give up on it. So please guys give it  a shot and share your feedback in comments please. I will play and rate everyone's game.

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Hello Here is our game, we had a lot of fun doing it. Hope you will too!

https://itch.io/jam/cgj/rate/476828

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https://anthonymitchell.itch.io/he-lies Web-based. No download required. It's fast paced and simple to learn. :)

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HA HA! Loved the idea. Quite simple and fun to play. 

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Heres mine if you want i ill take a look at yours too - Brave the Bugs

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Played through the game. Loved all the levels, I liked the way you conveyed the instruction through the conversation between designer and programmer.

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Hey, Here .. Check out my game ..  https://sashbros.itch.io/games-dont-lie

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Played and rated. 

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Thanks:)

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Ill check out your game and rate it :)

i made this game about a liar adventurer inside a liargame, checking it our would mean so much to me https://itch.io/jam/cgj/rate/476182 

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Played and rated your game as well. Thanks

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Hi here is our game, 

Its a Browser and Windows based game  : https://itch.io/jam/cgj/rate/476641

Thug Of Life

Hope you will enjoy it and don't forget to rate us 😊👍

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Played and rated it. Ofcourse I enjoyed it, Gave up after life count went to -50 :)

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I played and rated your game.

Can you rate mine: https://itch.io/jam/cgj/rate/476877
Thanks :)

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Done already

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Hi there!  Here is mine: https://itch.io/jam/cgj/rate/477192

Thank you!

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Played and rated!

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Here is my game Key-Tana, An action platformer with a twist. 

https://itch.io/jam/cgj/rate/476528


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Rated your Game this is my Game: https://itch.io/jam/cgj/rate/476937, its called You thought!

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Rated

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Ill check out your game and rate it :)

i made this game about a liar adventurer inside a liargame, checking it our would mean so much to me https://itch.io/jam/cgj/rate/476182 

Lieceiption link 

 https://itch.io/jam/cgj/rate/476182 

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This is my Game: https://itch.io/jam/cgj/rate/476937, its called You thought!

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Try mine out :) - Escape

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Done

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Thanks! Trying out yours now 

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Please please please play my game and give me constructive criticism if any, really looking forward to improvise it after the jam

https://itch.io/jam/cgj/rate/476600


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Played and rated it. A nice small world you have created.

https://itch.io/jam/cgj/rate/476196

A game of following simple instructions. Will you listen to P.H.I.L, or will you disobey his every command? Find out in the hilarious 2d platformer: "DON'T DO IT".

I hope you enjoy playing this game as much as we did making it. I would love it if you were to give us a rating and a comment as well! Thank you and have a nice day!

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Done!

thank you! :)

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Here is ours https://itch.io/jam/cgj/rate/476746


Have bookmarked yours to play after work!

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Interesting concept. Loved playing through it.

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Hey,  it's mine : https://itch.io/jam/cgj/rate/477182

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Ha ha nice game!

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Thanks for your playing. I play yours asap. 

^-^ have fun! 

https://itsnotsimon.itch.io/beyond-eden

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Nice game, loved playing it. I'm a psychopath according to the game, but hey I didn't kill the dog in the alley.

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Simple 2 min fps game with a touch of memes, Juaast a touch! https://itch.io/jam/cgj/rate/476320#post-943295 hope  you  play and enjoy and rate!

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Checked your game and left feedback about what was lacking for me. Check out our short story about brother and sister ;) https://itch.io/jam/cgj/rate/477178

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Nice game. Loved the graphics and story line, would look forward to play a bit longer story narrative game form you.

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here my game https://itch.io/jam/cgj/rate/477017

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Couldn't figure out how to get out of the first room. Art looks awesome, please reply so that I can play the whole game.

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so the game is a lie, means you need to go trough something that dosnt make sense. hoped that helped without spoiling something. and you dont need to klick on somerthink, the cursor is semitransparent because i tried to hide it:) thanks about the art:D

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Figured out finally, thanks for the help. Nice concept, loved playing it.

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thanks, im pleased you like it :)

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dont forget to rate it though :)

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Here's ours. It's a longer submission that has a story and quest line leading to the ending.  Works in browser or download:

https://strangereality.itch.io/pathologic

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Loved your game. Going in and out houses and shops effects felt really nice. The music changes in certain areas of town was amazing. Would bookmark it finish the game later this weekend. The world looks quite a big for a jam game. :)

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Its my first game jam! Here is my submission

https://stephcraft.itch.io/void

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A really nice game for your first jam. Cool pixel art and music. Especially the user agreement.

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Gonna check your game right now, here's mine in the meanwhile! Hope you like it!

https://itch.io/jam/cgj/rate/476849


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Awesome Awesome AWESOME game. 10 / 10 for everything. A very good narrative, combined with good gameplay, snappy controls. The best part were the effects. The mirrors in the game and what they did to the player and enemies. Through out the game I felt like playing a polished commercial game. It would have been cherry on cake if there was some background and platforms would have been something other than plane white rectangles, but that's just my opinion (coming from the guy who made a text game without any graphics). But all in all it was an amazing experience through out. Loved the ending, would try to achieve all the endings. It would be awesome if you'd share how you programmed the transition between gameplay and cut scenes that was amazing and I would love to learn that.   

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Hey.. Please try out our game. We are a team of two. This is our first time participating in a  game jam and it's only been a couple of months that we got into game development. Hope you enjoy it.

Any constructive criticism and suggestions are welcome!

https://itch.io/jam/cgj/rate/477183

There is also a web version that we uploaded - https://tsuyoung.itch.io/the-expensive-tale-of-mr-henry-crabs-web


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Done.

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Can you please rate mine

https://itch.io/jam/cgj/rate/476770

I have already played yours

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Done.

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downloading yours as i type this

heres a fun one i made , first jam so feel free to offer critique https://itch.io/jam/cgj/rate/476542

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Thanks hope you have fun. Rated yours.

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here is mine :)

https://itch.io/jam/cgj/rate/476054

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Played your game and rated. Had fun playing it, interesting idea got tower defense vibes playing this game. 

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Here is my game!  Thank you! https://itch.io/jam/cgj/rate/476247


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Loved the graphics. Did you use any sort of post processing? Loved the concept of the game. Music was on point with the falling arrows. I still cannot figure out how developers do this. All in all awesome experience.

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Where did ninja panda wake up, and what are these voices? Is what's happening real or illusory? Find out here!

Here's the link to the game my team and I have done, being my first game jam!
https://hadilepanda.itch.io/panda-spirit-cgj

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Rated!

hope you enjoy ;)) will check out your game now

https://itsnotsimon.itch.io/beyond-eden

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I already played and have shared my thoughts in one of the posts. So not sharing them here again.

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Here is mine.Enjoy!

https://itch.io/jam/cgj/rate/476922?after=1#comments

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For some reason it's not working on my PC

https://itch.io/jam/cgj/rate/476196

"A game of following simple instructions". In this short but great game, you must follow simple instructions given to you by your friendly neighbourhood 'P.H.I.L'. Will you follow his instructions? What happens if you don't? With over 50 ratings, 'DON'T DO IT' is a puzzle based platformer that's filled to the brim of humour. This game was made for the community game jam in under 7 days. Good luck, your challenge starts now!

It would make my week if anyone could check out this game which me and a couple others worked on. It would be greatly appreciated as a lot of work went into making it. I hope you enjoy it as much as we did making it! :)