I played your game on stream yesterday. I find it a bit too simple. It'd be nice if you could add in some upbeat music. I'm not sure what else to say, it's not really a game that I would find fun. Maybe something like quick time events would be interesting.

Here's the clip where I played your game: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2520904273

At the end of the game, it'd be nice if you added something to indicate that it ended. I assume the sister disappeared, so for example, the brother could wake up and find his sister gone and says, "sister, where are you?". Or maybe the sister can scream before she disappears.

But overall, the story is quite interesting, I think some more sound effects can be added to give it more life, even though there's no more life haha. So something like raining sounds and maybe some wind to show how empty it is.

Good job on the game!

Here's the clip where I played your game: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2520907924

First thing I noticed is the art, I love it. Very eye catching! The music is great too.

The minigames are cute, but I think not every minigame should have a timer, like the airplane one. At first, I wasn't sure what I was supposed to do, but going back to it again, I learned to control the plane a bit. I suggest giving lives instead of a timer for that one.

Also I really like block buster, so I kinda wish I could play that for longer haha

Overall, very cute game, good job!

Here's the clip of me playing your game: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2521096636

Hello, I played your game last night on stream. I was a bit confused about the email part, so I think some adjustments need to be made for that.

Throughout the game, I find the dialogue moves too fast, I'm a slow reader haha. So either slow it down, or make it so that I can click to move on.

But bro! The ending, so fucking funny!! I was crying! Good job! I love it!

Here's the clip of me playing your game: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2521149482

Hello I played your game on stream yesterday. I like it, very cute music and art style. I also like the eating sound haha.

Some changes I would suggest is using WASD for the controls, because it's physically more comfortable to play in my opinion. Chess part was a bit confusing, even after completing it, I wasn't sure about the reason why it worked. Overall, great game!

Here's the clip of me playing your game: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2521248812

Leap of Fate is a very simple and short game. Could've added different levels like changing the hexagon to a different shape, maybe add some obstacles. Before the lily pad disappears, maybe change the color a bit, so I know not to jump on it. I would say this game is not that fun for me because of how random the lily pads are.

I think a cooler concept would be to make the frogs move in mirror direction, and you build a puzzle map around that.

Here's the clip of me playing your game: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2521256710

You have a very cool game, the visuals and music are great!

I suggest slowing down her movement a bit, so I have enough time to react. She also jumps a bit too high, maybe change it to a double jump, so there's an option for the player to jump lower. 

I really like creating the green platform, very cool idea, good job on that.

Here's the clip of me playing your game: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2521273900

I played your game on stream. I really like this kind of game, very nice! First thing I noticed was the art, very cute! Some things I think needs some work is the lack of friction on moving platforms, it makes it a bit awkward to control. Another thing is the camera is locked, I'd like to move it a bit, so I can see the path better. One last thing, is the music doesn't loop, I could feel my mood drop when it stopped, so the music was definitely really good.

Overall, great game! Keep up the good work!

Here's the clip of me playing your game: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2521974205

Hello, I played your game on stream. It was quite difficult, it really tested my jumping skills. But once I got it, it was so satisfying.

At first, I was really annoyed from hearing "failure" over and over again, but then I started finding it funny. Can you make uncle Roger say failure instead? haha

Great game! I liked the AI backstory, very cool!

Here's the clip of me playing your game: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2521976087

I played your game, it's very interesting, I like how it's top down. There are some quality of life suggestions I have for you. When editing the store, it'd be nice to see the silhouette of the shelf I'm trying to place down. And maybe change the color of the money to something brighter because I didn't see it at first.

You have a good idea going on, this could be a fun game with some more adjustments, keep it up.

Hello, thank you for joining my stream! Here's a written review for you.

Your game is very creative. I really liked the beginning, it was kinda funny, chasing down the start button.

Color coded motivational quotes was a good idea, then changing the colors for the next day was a clever way to increase the difficulty. That means I have to actually read haha

The way you made the game really captures the struggle of phone addiction. I be doing that every day T-T

Sound effects were great, the option to give in to phone addiction was really interesting. Very cool game! Keep up the good work!!

Here's the clip of my playing your game: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2522386039

I like this. The music is enjoyable, sorting folders is actually kinda relaxing. The game in the game is very interesting, I really like the way you used arrow combos to attack. I also really like that there's different music for each section.

I think if the boss catches you playing a game, the job meter should decrease. Once the fun meter is 0, the job meter shouldn't go up, so the player needs to go play the game.

Overall, awesome game! Good job!

You can check out the VODs here, your game is on day 3: https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLUNY5DJjfhq31Tz1xxSWnzl2X6y395TLF&si=gc02CMhU...

Hello! I actually played your game! It was so funny and goofy, I love it! The voice over was great, I really enjoyed it. Got a bit difficult at the end cus my jumping skills aren't that good haha, but good job on your game, I will talk about it on stream :)

Your game looks really cool. Good job on the character design. 

I had a bit trouble at first, because there's too many enemies, I keep dying. So I just try my best to avoid them by jumping on the platform. Other than that, the combat is pretty decent.

Some things I would suggest is to reduce the amount of enemies, and maybe indicate the trial progress. The trials could be divided into stages, where I kill a number of enemies to move on. Another thing that would be nice is to add the title of your game to the menu screen. 

Overall, very cool game!

Here are the VODs, your game is on day 4: https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLUNY5DJjfhq31Tz1xxSWnzl2X6y395TLF&si=ze74QAfs...