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Your game looks really cool. Good job on the character design. 

I had a bit trouble at first, because there's too many enemies, I keep dying. So I just try my best to avoid them by jumping on the platform. Other than that, the combat is pretty decent.

Some things I would suggest is to reduce the amount of enemies, and maybe indicate the trial progress. The trials could be divided into stages, where I kill a number of enemies to move on. Another thing that would be nice is to add the title of your game to the menu screen. 

Overall, very cool game!

Here are the VODs, your game is on day 4: https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLUNY5DJjfhq31Tz1xxSWnzl2X6y395TLF&si=ze74QAfs...

You have a very cute game, music is really cute, the robot is adorable. Love it!

It was a bit hard controlling the grapple, because I keep mixing up which one is left or right mouse. But I still had fun!

Some problems I found is when swinging, it's kind of hard to grapple onto the temporary platform, because it's hard to aim while moving. Maybe if the screen didn't follow the robot, it'd be a little easier to aim.

Overall, very cool game! Good job!

Here are the VODs, your game is on day 3: https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLUNY5DJjfhq31Tz1xxSWnzl2X6y395TLF&si=vOxbFoMQ...

You have a very interesting game. Managing resources for the people and figuring out what they need is really cool. 

Some things I suggest changing is to put everything a bit closer to each other, I feel like there's just so much empty space, it's a bit weird. Also, you might be aware of this, but there's a cursor issue where I cant find my mouse, I need to tab out to get my mouse back.

Overall it's a cool game that can definitely be expanded on, and with some ominous music, it would be even better to increase tension.

Here are the VODs, your game is on day 3: https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLUNY5DJjfhq31Tz1xxSWnzl2X6y395TLF&si=XMpaP1ip...

I like this. The music is enjoyable, sorting folders is actually kinda relaxing. The game in the game is very interesting, I really like the way you used arrow combos to attack. I also really like that there's different music for each section.

I think if the boss catches you playing a game, the job meter should decrease. Once the fun meter is 0, the job meter shouldn't go up, so the player needs to go play the game.

Overall, awesome game! Good job!

You can check out the VODs here, your game is on day 3: https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLUNY5DJjfhq31Tz1xxSWnzl2X6y395TLF&si=gc02CMhU...

You have a very interesting game. The music is cool. I kinda wish we could separate the crabs to attack, because sometimes they take damage at the same time, so they all end up dying together. It'd also be nice if there are more levels.

The giant crab looked really cool. Good job on that!!

I played your game, it's very interesting, I like how it's top down. There are some quality of life suggestions I have for you. When editing the store, it'd be nice to see the silhouette of the shelf I'm trying to place down. And maybe change the color of the money to something brighter because I didn't see it at first.

You have a good idea going on, this could be a fun game with some more adjustments, keep it up.

You shouldn't blame it on yourself either. Like you said, time was the problem. You had the right idea already. Not every flower bloom at the same rate. Your game is a blooming bud, it needs a little more time, some water and sun to become a beautiful flower. Can't blame the flower for not blooming sooner. My examples are silly, but I hope you get what I mean.

You got this!!!

Hello, thank you for joining my stream today. I want to apologize for not quite understanding how the game worked at first. It must've been painful watching me do things wrong. 

After playing it again, I realize what I needed to do. I don't know why it didn't register in my mind how the chain reaction worked. It's possible my brain was a bit fried after playing so many games. I also should've read things more thoroughly. My brain tend to only retain half the information I read. 

Now that I understand how it all works, I want to suggest things you can do for the tutorial. I understand that your tutorial was a bit rushed, so please don't let it discourage you. An idea I have is let your anime girl guide the player through how things work, step by step, explaining what each thing does. I'm a slow learner, so to have things being explained one at a time and seeing what it does will help me understand better.

With the right tutorial, you can definitely reach a wider audience with different learning curves.

When I finally got a chain going, omg that was so damn satisfying! I can't believe I didn't know how to do it before. And the music was so good, it really feels like I'm on a mission. Keep it up! You have a great game!

Your game is very cute. I like the choice of music, but it'd be nice to make it loop because if I stay in an area for too long, it will end at some point.

A problem I had was that I can't buy the gear, the guy wont take my money T-T

Also, hitting an obstacle stops all velocity in that direction, and when trying to hit the skeleton, the swing animation doesn't always show up.

Overall, you have a nice game, good job!

Here's the clip of my stream: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2522396001

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I really like the character design and I love attacking with the arrow keys, it was a lot of fun! The story is very creative, the plot twist was amazing! I really enjoyed it!

A side note, can you allow breaking pots? My inner Link needs to break them hahaha

Here's the clip of me playing your game: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2522474475

Nice game, the mom looks very cute, I like her design.

The dialogue for the intro was a bit fast, I'm a slow reader, so I couldn't catch all of it. While playing, I was trying to pick up the dagger, but wasn't aware that I need to drag the items, but dumb luck, I misread "dagger" as "drag", and I figured it out. I also didn't realize the backpack icon in the corner, I accidentally hovered over it and learn that it exist. I suggest putting some instructions somewhere to make that more clear. The green arrow also threw me off, as I thought I need to put the items there.

Putting the item in the bag is nice, I like the item management, but sometimes it doesn't always go where I want it to.

Since there's different items every time, it doesn't feel like I'm in control, so the endings are gonna be random.

Overall, I will say that it's an interesting game. 

Here's the clip from stream: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2522403137

This is a goofy game, I like how silly it is. Kinda wish there was a bit more puzzles, but so far, it's quite creative.

During the password puzzle,  I immediately tried to solve it and missed the instructions, so I didn't know how to rotate the pieces. Maybe put the instructions over the puzzle with bold text. 

Overall, very nice puzzle game, keep it up!

Here's the clip from my stream: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2522400684

Your game has a very cool mechanic. It is quite difficult, I couldn't get far as my jumping skills are lacking. Would be nice to have some background music because playing this in silence feels a bit gloomy. 

I would suggest adding some instructions to let the player know that they shouldn't be touching the walls while jumping. I had no idea and was trying to wall jump, until someone from my stream chat told me what I need to do.

Overall, really cool and challenging game!

Here's the clip of me playing your game: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2522398230

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This is a very cool bullet hell game. It's very creative to use the number of pilots as health remaining. The music is cool, it really fits the game. The attack patterns are also really nice, I think it's the right difficulty for me, I just need to play a few more times to master dodging the projectiles. The dialogue was also really good.

I really enjoyed playing, good job!

Here's the clip of me playing your game: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2522393380

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First thing's first, your game is absolutely beautiful. The art for everything is so nice, the music is very pleasing. The drawing part was really cute, and using those tiles to draw is so creative, the only thing is that the eraser is a bit funky.

Story is very nice, with a good message, it really resonates with me as I always have art blocks. Amazing work for doing the art, music, and writing by yourself.

It's one of my top fav game for sure! I look forward to see more from you!

Here's the clip of me playing your game: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2522390563

You have a very cool platformer. I really like the art for the background. The platforms look good, they aren't in your face, but it's still clear that those are platforms. The music is also cool

There are times when I thought he would stick his landing, but sometimes he slides off the edge which annoyed me a bit. When hitting the wall, you bounce kinda far, maybe fall straight down would be nice. Or it's just skill issue on my part haha

Overall, it's a cool and challenging game!! 

Here is the clip of me playing your game: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2522387876

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Your game is very creative. I really liked the beginning, it was kinda funny, chasing down the start button.

Color coded motivational quotes was a good idea, then changing the colors for the next day was a clever way to increase the difficulty. That means I have to actually read haha

The way you made the game really captures the struggle of phone addiction. I be doing that every day T-T

Sound effects were great, the option to give in to phone addiction was really interesting. Very cool game! Keep up the good work!!

Here's the clip of my playing your game: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2522386039

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For a first game, this is pretty good. I would suggest making a tutorial stage to let the player understand the controls, and learn to shift. If you weren't there, I wouldn't have known.

Also, the car is a bit too fast, maybe give the car some time to accelerate. I keep running into the walls and it's a bit difficult to control.

When the car breaks down, it's cool that you have to restart the car.

You have a very good idea going on, so keep up the good work!

Here's the clip of me playing your game: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2521978983

Hello, I played your game on stream. It was quite difficult, it really tested my jumping skills. But once I got it, it was so satisfying.

At first, I was really annoyed from hearing "failure" over and over again, but then I started finding it funny. Can you make uncle Roger say failure instead? haha

Great game! I liked the AI backstory, very cool!

Here's the clip of me playing your game: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2521976087

I played your game on stream. I really like this kind of game, very nice! First thing I noticed was the art, very cute! Some things I think needs some work is the lack of friction on moving platforms, it makes it a bit awkward to control. Another thing is the camera is locked, I'd like to move it a bit, so I can see the path better. One last thing, is the music doesn't loop, I could feel my mood drop when it stopped, so the music was definitely really good.

Overall, great game! Keep up the good work!

Here's the clip of me playing your game: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2521974205

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First, I will say that the robot is so damn cute, love the music, and sound effects are on point. The only thing I don't really like is how slippery he is.

Overall, the puzzles are super creative. I had a lot fun, definitely one of the best games I've played. Very good job!

Here's the clip of me playing your game: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2521174316

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To start off, very creative game, being able to change the size of the snowball is very cool. 

Some things I think you can work on is fix the menu screen so that it's not in the top corner. I also find the sound effect for the dialogue is a bit much, maybe try changing the pitch or lower the volume. We also talked about it on stream, that it'd be nice to have some checkpoints, and for enemies that I killed to stay dead. Also adding some subtle background music would be nice too, to give it some additional winter vibes.

I really wish I could play more, but the lack of checkpoints kind of bothered me. Overall, very good game. Keep it up!!

Here's the clip of me playing your game: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2521169517

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You have a very creative puzzle game, was confused in the beginning, but then realize what I needed to do, then the game became super fun. The block buster was great. The radio was good too, I actually really like that. But I didn't notice the proceed button, so either turn off the radio or make the proceed button brighter. 

Very fun game, keep up the good work!

Here's the clip of me playing your game: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2521090903

Wow only 3 days? That's crazy!

And I agree, not every game is for everyone, your game is probably just not made for me.

I wish you luck in this game jam! Keep it up!

You're very welcome! I'm happy to help. Keep up the good work!

You have a very cool game, the visuals and music are great!

I suggest slowing down her movement a bit, so I have enough time to react. She also jumps a bit too high, maybe change it to a double jump, so there's an option for the player to jump lower. 

I really like creating the green platform, very cool idea, good job on that.

Here's the clip of me playing your game: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2521273900

Leap of Fate is a very simple and short game. Could've added different levels like changing the hexagon to a different shape, maybe add some obstacles. Before the lily pad disappears, maybe change the color a bit, so I know not to jump on it. I would say this game is not that fun for me because of how random the lily pads are.

I think a cooler concept would be to make the frogs move in mirror direction, and you build a puzzle map around that.

Here's the clip of me playing your game: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2521256710

Hello I played your game on stream yesterday. I like it, very cute music and art style. I also like the eating sound haha.

Some changes I would suggest is using WASD for the controls, because it's physically more comfortable to play in my opinion. Chess part was a bit confusing, even after completing it, I wasn't sure about the reason why it worked. Overall, great game!

Here's the clip of me playing your game: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2521248812

Go ahead, feel free to share!

Hello, I played your game last night on stream. I was a bit confused about the email part, so I think some adjustments need to be made for that.

Throughout the game, I find the dialogue moves too fast, I'm a slow reader haha. So either slow it down, or make it so that I can click to move on.

But bro! The ending, so fucking funny!! I was crying! Good job! I love it!

Here's the clip of me playing your game: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2521149482

Ooh nice! I'd like to see what changes you will make.

First thing I noticed is the art, I love it. Very eye catching! The music is great too.

The minigames are cute, but I think not every minigame should have a timer, like the airplane one. At first, I wasn't sure what I was supposed to do, but going back to it again, I learned to control the plane a bit. I suggest giving lives instead of a timer for that one.

Also I really like block buster, so I kinda wish I could play that for longer haha

Overall, very cute game, good job!

Here's the clip of me playing your game: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2521096636

oh I see, it's not easy making a game, so I can understand. It's a good start, keep it up!

WOW

I wasn't expecting a horror game. It was creepy, so good job on that. I don't really play horror games, so I was so creeped out that my brain wasn't working haha. My brain didn't register what the numbers meant at first, but I eventually got it, and finished the game.

The end was great, the WOW gave me a good laugh.

Here's the clip of me playing your game: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2521095485

Hello, I played your game on stream yesterday. When starting the game, it looked like a PowerPoint presentation.

For a Visual novel, I think it lacks some music, the background could be better, and some animation for the character would be nice or maybe just change the pose if you want to stick with png image.

At some point the game kinda stops working, so maybe check that out.

For a visual novel, visuals are very important, so I suggest giving the player something more to see. If you can make it similar to a webtoon, that'd be cool.

I also think you can shorten the dialogue a bit, it's very descriptive, as if you're just writing a book. Adding appropriate images, can help describe the scene better, so you don't have to write as much.

Here's the clip of me playing your game: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2521115816

At the end of the game, it'd be nice if you added something to indicate that it ended. I assume the sister disappeared, so for example, the brother could wake up and find his sister gone and says, "sister, where are you?". Or maybe the sister can scream before she disappears.

But overall, the story is quite interesting, I think some more sound effects can be added to give it more life, even though there's no more life haha. So something like raining sounds and maybe some wind to show how empty it is.

Good job on the game!

Here's the clip where I played your game: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2520907924

I played your game on stream yesterday. I find it a bit too simple. It'd be nice if you could add in some upbeat music. I'm not sure what else to say, it's not really a game that I would find fun. Maybe something like quick time events would be interesting.

Here's the clip where I played your game: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2520904273

Today's stream went great, I wasn't able to play every game, so hopefully I get to play them tomorrow. I'll be writing a review for every game I played, and will share clips of my stream if you missed it. Hope to see some of you again tomorrow!

Hello! I actually played your game! It was so funny and goofy, I love it! The voice over was great, I really enjoyed it. Got a bit difficult at the end cus my jumping skills aren't that good haha, but good job on your game, I will talk about it on stream :)

I actually played your game last night! I loved it! The music was fantastic, and the attack patters were great! It would be nice if taking damage had a sound effect. Other than that, it's a 5/5 game for me. I will definitely talk about it on stream! Good job!