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Hey! Submit your game for feedback!

A topic by P B Giridharahn created Oct 07, 2020 Views: 4,010 Replies: 116
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Hey, I am a twitch streamer: twitch.com/gboyplays , and I play itch.io games every alternate weekend! I am a game developer myself and I would love to give feedback on your game from both the perspective of a DEV and a gamer! Send me in your games and I will play it to give you feedback!

Put down a link to your game and I will get to it!

Games I've made: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLaaroQWwRd-qD_zyAx5_iUB1XyXGRgp5Q


EDIT 1: I am so happy with all your responses! I can't wait to play all of your submissions! I will update soon with a schedule and an excel sheet. :D. Happy Game Dev!

EDIT 2: The schedule spreadsheet is here! 

EDIT 3: I did NOT expect this many replies, Thank you much for it! I have decided to stream EVERY weekend instead of just alternate weekends! :D!

EDIT 4: NO MORE GAMES :), I am heading home for the christmas holidays and I do not have a tentative date on when I will return. I will open a new forum or open this one back again when I return. Thank you again so much for the submissions so far! :).

Spreadsheet link : https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/124hU22XryLRMcsRrbtwS-rv4tOAfb1GgTBOmTlqf...

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Hi Backslap Studios,

I’ve been working on a puzzle game since May 2020 called “The king is gone”.

It is currently in alpha and under active development, but there is a demo available on the link above. I’m slowly approaching the final steps before the first stable version, and I would appreciate any type of feedback about the game.

Hope that you like it and decide to give it a go.

Hey your game comment should have the feedback link :)

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Hey!
Sounds like i can post a little something here
I just made a demo of my first game ( its a very early state but it could be interesting to have your opinion on it)
Here it is:  https://valntainthedeveloper.itch.io/lagarderie-soorvaivol-lvl1

For now, it is just a shoot them all/die and retry that is mixing platformer stage with an exploration rpg-like at some points
Hope you like it !

Disclaimer: it might be a little too hard ;p

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Hey your game comment should have the feedback link :)

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I would love if you could playtest Cat-Powered UFO!  :D


https://thesneak.itch.io/cat-powered-ufo


I happen to do video feedback for developers myself.

If you want some feedback on a game, just say so!  :)

Thanks for doing this for the community by the way, I know how much it helps to get feedback, especially video feedback!!

Hey your playthrough comments/bug reports should have the feedback link :) 

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Hello Backslap Studios, We have a challenging game for you to play!  https://rgby-studios.itch.io/color-beads-the-rage-game

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Hey Everybody, Thank you so much for your awesome response!  I will look into all of your games this weekend! I am so excited! 

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Please let us know if you streamed any of the games submitted here ;)

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Yes I will be putting the link directly on your game :)

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Thanks for asking! Your videos look great, and I would really like as much feedback as I can get before launching my Kickstarter.


It is a fantasy RPG that's set in a modern world, and it includes activities such as

  • Battle
  • Boss battle
  • Puzzle solving
  • Making choices in speech and action 

This is a demo that brings you around 20 minutes of gaming experience. I'll be glad if you check it out :D

Here's the link https://mighcty.itch.io/legacy-of-datura

Hey! Your game comment should have the feedback link :)

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Hi! I'm working on my RPG game "Zenorost Realm", I'd be happy if you have a look at it:

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Hey I did play your game but my  Microphone got cutoff while recording in the middle.  The link to the video is still here, but I will play your game again next week and give feedback again!

Thanks for waiting!

https://www.twitch.tv/videos/767659193?t=01h11m20s

Hi, thanks for your stream, I like it! Ok, maybe I will have time to update the game,  thanks anyway for your attention.

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m3cLx9XOImg&t=19s

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Hi BackSlap Studios,

Made this game with friends awhile back. The game is centered around building your robot's AI to fight for you. Some battles require you to reprogram the robot and upgrade its' gear in order to move on.

 Any and all critical feedback is much appreciated!

Check out the trailer and download here.

https://www.robitsgame.com/

Hey your game comment should have the feedback link :)

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Hi! I'd like you to take a look at my game, it's called "Keep It Rising, Stupid!" The game is about climbing as high as you can by jumping between beams, at the same time you collect boosts, evade balls and collect coins which are used to buy skins.

https://wandil.itch.io/keep-it-rising-stupid


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Hi :)

If you like psychological horror, you can try my brief interactive fiction, This is the Way:

https://kyriakosch.itch.io/this-is-the-way


trailer:

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Hey your game comment should have the feedback link :)

Thank you so much for the AWESOME review!!! :)

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Hey Backslap,

I made ashort art game. Would love to get some critique on it !


https://jonasjoergenjacobsen.itch.io/erl

Hey your game comment should have the feedback link :)

Hello Everybody! I did my first chunk of feedback! The games I did feedback for should have a link to the timestamped stream in their game comments! I have also created a spreadsheet to keep track of the next games I am going to lay for feedback!

Thank you everybody! Happy Game Dev!

Spreadhseet link : https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/124hU22XryLRMcsRrbtwS-rv4tOAfb1GgTBOmTlqf...

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Hi, I am currently actively working on my first project. I spend a lot of time and effort on its development. I would like to hear from you about my game. I hope you enjoy it =)

Link to the game: https://iko-games.itch.io/techno

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Thank you for replying! Added you to the stream schedule spread sheet! :)

Hey your game comment should have the feedback link :)

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Hey Backslap Studios,

Could you try this out:
https://yrbiax.itch.io/the-struggle-of-combat

It's side-scrolling shooter with roguelite elements. I would love to hear your thoughts! :)

Here is free download key: https://yrbiax.itch.io/the-struggle-of-combat/download/gyHczNt_BccWq1jRsg_XIwmtz...

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Hey thanks for the key! Added you to the stream schedule spread sheet! :)

Hey the key is  apparently not working, could you please check! Thank you! :D

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Looks like someone else claimed it.  Here is another one:

https://yrbiax.itch.io/the-struggle-of-combat/download/SpqYMN6s4HmUItdH0sdhXO0Hn...

Hey! Your game comments should have the feedback to the game! :)

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Hey, im a novice game dev, and i created this game : https://reuniao-gamer.itch.io/cursorbattle

it´s an local multiplayer game, where one person plays with the mouse, and the other with te keyboard

the game is in alpha state, so im sorry for the graphics

would love your feedback, sorry for my english, im Brazilian

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Thank you for replying! Added you to the stream schedule spread sheet! :)

thanks!

Just one question. At what time you will host the streams?

Hey it will be at 2 PM PDT! But if you can't make it, its okay  I will put a link to your gaeme's feedback in the game comments :D! 

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Hi, thx for this thread & twitch streaming.

We've just released a new retro RPG mini-game called Dragon Battle. After 10 months of coding a new retro RPG, we started refining/building our our combat system and discovered that battling dragons was really fun.

Featuring artwork by Sharm (https://opengameart.org/content/rpg-enemies-11-dragons, https://opengameart.org/users/sharm). Future updates will include more dragons from the same art pack.

Music was custom-made for the game.

Game features:

- retro-RPG combat
- 4 player classes (fighter, knight, wizard and ninja)
- a variety of weapons and armor (note: ninja has weapon-less karate combat bonuses!)
- leveling up spell & skill system

Dragon Battle is free-to-play here:

https://apt18.itch.io/dragon-battle

Dragon Battle movie trailer


Thx for the interest & feedback!

Thank you for replying! Added you to the stream schedule spread sheet! :)

Hey your game comment should have the feedback link :)

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Can you be more specific? You can leave feedback in the comments section of the game, or private message me directly. Is there another feedback link that would be more appropriate?

Heyo your game comments should have the link :D

But no worries here you go: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/774835143?t=00h38m40s ! 

Saw this & just responded on the game page itself. Thx for such a great & helpful review. Would love to get your feedback on an update that fixes the "boring" issue.

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hey there,

My game is Dream Ception (made for unexpected game jam)

In this game, you have no idea where are you or if u clear a level you will be transported somewhere else and the story line is just weird. But throughout the whole game you have to remember one thing "THERE WILL BE CONSEQUENCES"

Anyways. Enjoy the game 

And dont forget to tell me if you would like to play my game :D

Thank you for replying! Added you to the stream schedule spread sheet! :)

Thanks!

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one more thing while playing the game, in a level if it says to b-hop and you are playing it on browser then pls dont as it may cause you to exit the game. Judt touch the yellow cube. Thanks

Will keep that in mind! :D

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just one question, what time will you be streaming and also can u pls provide a link to the stream either by replying the message here or in the game comments 

Thanks 

Heyy!! The stream usually happens around 2PM PDT but can change an hour after or before according to unforeseen circumstances ! But no worries, I will post a link to the stream WITH the timestamp at which I played your game in your game comments! :D

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ok thanks a lot!

Hey! Your game comments should have the link to the game! :)

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Hey there, thanks for the great feedback you gave me about the text and the lighting. The feedback session was very good and detailed. Now I know what to improve in and also I am still trying to fix the mouse bug at the thanks for playing scene(still haven't got what is causing it) thanks again :D

Hey there, just updated dream ception. the following is extracted from my devlog.

 >fixed the music jarring 

>Secret level added (i dare you to find it)

>Now the text doesn't overlap (it triggers when the player steps on a certain place to stop overlaping)

>Gameplay and looks have been improved to actually give a spooky look on the game

>updated the title screen

>Music is not very loud and so it doesn't blast your ears

>Icon updated 

(the mouse bug glitch is still there but it will get fixed. i have no idea whats causing it)

note that the story line is the same but the gameplay has been improved a lot :D

link: https://agentxman.itch.io/dream-ception

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Hi, I've created a game using asteroids as inspiration. You destroy asteroids and aliens spaceships to get upgrades for your ship and while doing so you try to travel towards the planet by constantly moving and when you do get to the planet, you gain boost to your ship.

https://nardrasgaming.itch.io/asteroids-far-away-from-home


Feedback link: https://itch.io/t/1020948/feedback

I hope you try it and enjoy :)

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Thank you for replying! Added you to the stream schedule spread sheet! :)

Hey! The comments for your game should have the link to the feedback! :)

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Hey! Since your asking: https://swadje.itch.io/visual-impairment -- it was created for Mini Jam 65 in 72 hours. I hope you get time to play it and let me know what you think! I'm 17 and it was not only my first jam, my first proper game that is playable!

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Thank you for replying! Added you to the stream schedule spread sheet! :)

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Hey your game comments should have the stream link :)

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Hey, thank you for doing this! If you're still accepting more; we recently finished our first demo of "Eternal Seas"; a story-driven pirate game with RPG-elements. It's free-to-play and can be downloaded from here: https://vincentiusiv.itch.io/eternal-seas

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Yess! I am definitely accepting :D, Added you to the stream schedule sheet! :D

Hey your game comments should have the stream link :)

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Hello! I've been working on this game for around 2 years and I've finally released a Demo. It's a Bullet Bell platformer and I'm looking for feedback! I look forward to watching your streams :)


https://angusbeer.itch.io/sunset-witch

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Hey! Thank you for replying! Added your game to the stream schedule! :D

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Hey!

I’d be really proud if you could give my game a try as well: logo

gameplay

Thanks!

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Added you to the schedule :D

Hey your game comments should have the stream link :)

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Hey!

I would love go get more feedback on my game! Just put out a new version, its not the last version so I would love to get some feedback so I know where to improve! On top of this it would be amazing to see my game played on video so yeah count me in if you have time!

CityBilder BETA 3.0

https://guldor.itch.io/citybuilder

Its a city simulation puzzle game made with Unity. Every building affects the city and it's neighbors. Keep your population happy while maintaining the economy and thinking about how to solve the puzzle by building the requested buildings.

I would love to hear what you think! It plays in Browser, Linux, Windows and MAC. 


Thank you!
Marc

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Added you to the stream spreadsheet :D

Thank you! Would love to hear what you think! 

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Hey your game comments should have the stream link :)

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Hey!  Really awesome of you to do this!  Don't know if you are still accepting, but I would love some thoughts on my survival horror game!  I am trying to get as much criticism as possible before I start full development to make improvements for the full launch next year on Steam!  It is still rough around the edges and some features haven't been implemented yet, but would love to hear what you think about the story, atmosphere, mechanics and what not!


https://tab95studios.itch.io/heritage-prologue-demo

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Heyy I am still definitely accepting! Added you to the stream schedule. :D

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Awesome!  Thank you so much!

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Hello! I've been working on this game since I was like 15. I didn't get any feedback since it was released. I hope you'll enjoy it. 

https://xilean1.itch.io/tealgrounds

Added you to the stream schedule! :)

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Thank you for the response! Make sure you own the newest version of the game because, there were some glitches with the fullscreen and stretch options.

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I looked at some of your videos and I'm really surprised at how few views you get for the quality of your work. You deserve so much more with how much of your time seems to have been put into your games and trailers.

As for a game you could maybe look at, I have a city building game called "Metropolis Manager" (https://ldgamingexpress.itch.io/metropolis-manager). It is a html/js game that works best if opened in chrome (I should probably try embedding it into the page, but I keep forgetting to with all the stuff I have to do for high school). If you play my game, I welcome any feedback so I can improve it.

Game Features (pasted from what I have on my page so you can quickly tell if this interests you at all):

-Basic city building (zone placement, building construction, and taxes).

-A happiness system.

-Random terrain generation.

-3 random events (financial crisis, protesters, and rioters)

-The tax system is influenced by the happiness of your city (the effects are shown under the budget if there are any). (1.1)

-Map generation can be changed in the options menu before generating your world. (1.1)

-Protesters and rioters affect happiness and in turn your budget. (1.1)


Thank you for offering this opportunity to people!

Hey! Thanks for replying,  Added you to the stream schedule sheet :)

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Hi Backslap :)

Really cool initative. Not sure if my comment will get drowned out, but I figured I would post anyway.

So, this is our game Glyph! A colourful and atmospheric 3D platformer game we hope to release on Switch later this year.  --> https://bolverk-games.itch.io/glyph

The game is currently in Open-Alpha. I hope you will enjoy our free demo, and if you have the time, please do leave behind some feedback.


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Hey thank you for replying, no comments get drowned out,  I Make sure to check each and every one of them :),  Added you to the stream schedule spreadsheet! :)

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That is so awesome! Thanks! :D

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Hello there! :)

I decided to start learning  programming  in C#/Unity this year by making a small project. I didn't expect to go beyond few moving boxes, but here I am today. I got really hooked and started creating assets, learning about unity tools that I've never worked with (mostly the animation thing and shaderGraph) and realizing I know nothing about sound design :D (all the sound are free assets - creators are credited in a .txt file. I'll create special menu for them when I start working on the UI). 

I would really appreciate any feedback that would help me improve this project (and no, I'm  not removing the blood and gore :P)

Link:
https://chrissx2.itch.io/silly-champ

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Thanks and thank You for playing it! The video was very entertaining and informative! (I'm following now)

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Asteroid Dodger

https://ellisjames20061.itch.io/asteroid-dodger

Asteroid dodger is a fun and fast paced game where you are an alien who must dodge the asteroids falling from the sky and not get hit by the spikes. You can play as a green and blue alien.



Added you to the schedule. thank you for replying :)

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thankyou

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Third chunk of game feedback has been released! Here is the twitch link: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/785205735!


Great job everybody and everybody who has submitted and are part of the future streams, I am really excited to play your projects! :D

Hello!

Nice to meet you! This is my first offence in game development: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1MShh_EQPqtEqpXSEn6YGlL4ucVIy5XWB/view?usp=shari...

Please, share a link on itch.io: https://sdg12832.itch.io/the-pied-piper-of-gamelin

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Hi. I'm currently working on my first game and would love feedback on it. The game is called Reaction and is available here. The game is still in development and just the demo is up with the first part of the game available. Hope you give it a shot and please tell what you think.

Thank you for replying, added you to the schedule :)

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Hey…. I would love your feedback on my game - “Shoot Mania”, submitted to “Out of Time” Jam…

Shoot the boxes.. boom bam kapow… In the world of guns and lasers, here lies a First Person Shooting(FPS) game…

We have:

Laser Projectiles A Matrix Background Score increasing moving positive targets Time decreasing spinning negative targets Time increasing spinning bonus targets (shoot ‘em fast) Some color-changing superbonus targets(you gotta find out what they do 😜) The “Time Dilating” pumpkins (It’s halloween after all) Exhilirating music

IMPORTANT

Use external mouse for best feel and accuracy. WebGL FPS games generally have a not-so-much accurate feeling of FPS, so try to play the various(Windows, MAC or Linux) downloadable version. 🙂

Shoot Mania

Thanks in advance… :)

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Thanks for replying, added you to the stream schedule :)

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Hi! I participated in a 72-hour game jam(first game jam ever phew) and would appreciate feedback! Thank you
https://samtapioca.itch.io/mini-candy-hunt

Hey, thank you for replying! Added you to the schedule sheet! :D

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Hi, I am a one man developer and have recently released my mobile game Trash Invasion. It is about handling an invasion of trash, catch trash mutants, learning how to recycle and helping the world from pollution (for real). I will give feedback on your projects as well. 

Trash Invasion Update v1.1.2 - Now on Google Play:

https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=com.differentwaygames.trashinvasio...

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Thanks for replying, added you to the schedule :)

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Thank you. Cheers!

The 4th Chunk of game feedback is now up and live: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/792349370


Thank you everybody for submitting!

Hello, I've recently made a new game and published it here. I would love some feedback on it, even if you don't record it or shout it out. as a new developer I'll take any advice!

https://packed1000.itch.io/cube-dodge


Thanks for your efforts dude!

I could use some feedback on the newest reworked version of my game, please consider it.

Nautilon Submarine Quest

Hope you like!

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Thank you!

Here is my game,  Fist Fury (Chapter 0). It is an action-adventure game and the first game I've released. I took help from a friend, Stephan Bester who made the amazing music tracks for the game.

The story is focused more rather than the gameplay, so if you like story-based games, you might like this one.

It is the prologue for the upcoming game Fist Fury. I would really appreciate any advice/feedback/constructive criticisms

Link ->  https://shinado-uzake.itch.io/fist-fury-chapter-0

Hope you like it :)

Hello! I would be glad to see the game in your release: The Place

Thank you.

Hey Backslap Studios, Get to da Chopaaa! is a party game for 2 to 4 players but you can also play alone against bots... 

https://ghost-creative-studio.itch.io/get-to-da-chopaaa

Hi i would appreciate you checking out my game:

https://ellisjames20061.itch.io/moonshot-plan

For months aliens have been terrorising the planet. They have killed anybody who tries and stops them. Everyday more and more people are abandoning the big cities and the aliens have began to take over. There are rumors their headquarters are based on the moon.

One brave astronaut has a moonshot plan to take out all of the enemies on the moon and destroy then aliens motherships alone with no help. it is your job to save the planet and bring peace back to earth.  

This game was created in under 1 month for game off 2020

Github link: https://github.com/ellisdobson20061/GameOff2020-ellisjames20061

Hi this is my game:

https://ellisjames20061.itch.io/moonshot-plan

For months aliens have been terrorising the planet. They have killed anybody who tries and stops them. Everyday more and more people are abandoning the big cities and the aliens have began to take over. There are rumors their headquarters are based on the moon.

One brave astronaut has a moonshot plan to take out all of the enemies on the moon and destroy then aliens motherships alone with no help. it is your job to save the planet and bring peace back to earth.  

This game was created in under 1 month for game off 2020

Github link: https://github.com/ellisdobson20061/GameOff2020-ellisjames20061

Hello. I'd be appreciated if you could play my game and let me know what you think about the game!

It's a game about saving human knowledge by searching through database.

You can get more info and download the game in this link: https://jungwooyom.itch.io/tracing

Best Regards,

YJW

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DOWNLOAD FREE! :)

My Game:) Feedback.
Features

  • Skill system
  • A system of improving the attributes of the character
  • The ability to change the appearance(skins)
  • Challenging levels
  • Riches
  • HD Graphics
  • Secret places
  • Hordes of demons
  • Real chaos 10/10
  • Hordes of demons

There are screamers

DOWNLOAD FREE! :)



https://ellisjames20061.itch.io/lost

You are a rocket lost in space and must find earth whilst avoiding threats or crashing

Hi Backslap Studios,

Even the origin's post having the updated line that you probably either continue reviewing games here or opening a new thread, at least in case in know which method getting chosen and possibly you still view this thread but posting comments or sharing videos on twitch/youtube in a new thread, my game being nicknamed "alley 404" https://crossfire271.itch.io/alley-404 and it would be an honor if you like to add your thoughts in a lets-play version :-)

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Hi, thanks for making this :-)
Here is an early version of my game. It's a motcross racing game with exploration and (optional) physics puzzles.
There is a tutorial level and a demo level. Playtime should be around 5-20 minutes. I am looking for feedback (especially on the controls).


You can find it here on Itch:
https://kamgam.itch.io/airborne

Or here on the website:
https://airborne.kamgam.com/

Direct Download Links:
Windows (zip with .exe): https://airborne.kamgam.com/build-files/AirborneMotocross-0ca5962.zip
Android (.apk): https://airborne.kamgam.com/build-files/sbr2-v1.0.0-b206.apk

There is a short feedback form within the game (if you want to fill it out).
Looking forward to your comments on the game!

Thank you

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Hi! I would like to test my project:

Nova Slayer

A 2D Shoot’Em’Up game with four playable levels and three difficulty modes.

You’re the chosen one to stop the Nova Invasion. You’ll have to destroy them all in order to save your planet.

Download link: https://estebanjoelslobodianik.itch.io/nova-slayer

I hope you like it and I would love to know your feedback (n.n)/