I'm a big fan of Depth Crawls and I just wanted to say it's really impressive that you were able to distill it down to a pamphlet format.

Doc, you have another banger on your hands… even with giving you a 1 in theme (the lowest you can give) you still managed to be among the higher scores i’ve given in my personal notes (where i can rate things with .5s as God intended!)

I will sit down and give you detailed notes as promised once the Jam is over, but my quick note is, you currently have a few points of “Blank” space that look a little odd, and i think with some creative reworking of where things are located in the layout might be able to fit together to actually give you a little more writing space.

And to that point, the extra writing space could be used to create some suggestions on how to journal, or maybe some rules as to gaining integrity via journalling or some such…

regardless you’ve made another fantastic module! congrats!

Dude this is so cool. Everything about the module feels crafted to inflict melancholy and drama as you pull yourself across the wastes. Yet there are points of light in the darkness and the potential for interactions with the other wanders are boundless. I think this is a really special one. 

The font and background contrast worked for me. No readability issues. 

I did feel a like the description of the hex crawl mechanics lose me a bit, but with the diagram I got what you're going for. 

I don't really see a connection with the theme. The size scale is pretty massive so I struggle to see how this would be on a space station, perhaps a moon or something though? 

A supplement providing a framework for hexcrawling in the sink, and tables for randomly generating the content of hexes, and a system for playing solo. It is absolutely gorgeous, making use of great art and colour for a hugely atmospheric pamphlet. Unfortunately, the font’s thin lines makes it quite a struggle to read on the non-uniform dark background.

There are also a few inconsistencies: the description of integrity mentions starting with a maximum of 5, but the diagram and illustration below implied a maximum of six. The 10km hexes are also incompatible with the description of Prospero’s dream, which gives the diameter of the entire station (not just the central part containing the Choke) at 13km. The random tables are good however, and can be used for expeditions to the Choke regardless of whether the hexcrawl mechanics are used.

So good! I want to play this and make a video about it. I hope you don't mind if I incorporate some of Thousand Empty Light into it.

I see myself playing this as a solo / journalling experience. The game system seems quite complete for that. 

Beautifu artl! I've never tried solo play but looking at this trifold inspires me.

Wow! This is exactly the type of thing I didn't know I wanted, but now that I have it I'm super stoked to use it!

Funnily enough, Mothership is what made me grok soloplay so now that you've made this little oracle I'm so excited to use it. The art and layout are so good too! I especially love the shakey text for "The Whispers grow loud." There's also  some very very evocative writing and art in here.

I'm failing to see how this relates to the Theme, but other than that I absolutely love this (and don't think it needs to relate to the theme at all btw).

I have no experience with solo play, but this looks very intriguing. And it easily turns into a dungeon crawl. Very nicely done!

Looks like I will be playing some mothership solo.

Beautiful work - I'm shocked how much you fit into a trifold without it feeling cramped! Solo-friendly rules for hexcrawling in the Choke is exactly the sort of thing I hoped this jam would produce, and you've exceeded all expectations. I hope folks love this one!

• great solo play module !
• nice map mechanics !
• objects your find are interesting and people you meet too, same for the locations !

frickin epic.