Okay loved the lore, love the utility, loved the vibes! I’m torn on the Art because it looks really cool and gets super vibey in all the right ways (gives me major Peter Max meets Lisa Frank vibes… which is something i never thought i’d say haha) BUT the art unfortunately works actively against readability which is kind of important haha. The lack of contrast, the shift in fonts… again all deliberate and helps to build the vibes of a pseudo simulation drug trip… but its very hard on the senses and distracting.
I only have one nitpick (other than overall legibility) is in location 3 “The climb is slippery (Body Save or gain 3 Stress from a long fall)” i would change long fall to “Bad Trip” you know for the drug pun…
This review sounds more negative than i want it to sound… i honestly love this module and rated it in the top 10 of the Jam for me personally! i think that my issues with the art sound stronger than they are because I don’t want such a good module to be held back by anything… even if the thing holding it back is that it looks rad as shit!

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