As just minor review of your review, as you mentioned about other submissions, i think you might get too caught up on the information ordering. I don't disagree with anything regarding the front panels, but the pdf is stand off for pdf and different folds. I think as long as the information is graspable and able to be found, I think the submission is good. In my case there is 4 clear sections on the panels, start might be clunky, but it's not that hard to grasp. Changing the positions would change the placement of the art, that's why the sections are where they are.
Same applies to the page 2. It's unfortunate that it was not smooth sailing, but I think it's absolutely crusial for discriptions and images to be side by side, cos players will jump around. Once this 'disconnect' is cleared, we are all good. I frankly doubt many will have this problem, hopefully not.
I get the want for more clarification on the intentions. I personally am fine leaving it mysterious, only the environment suggesting things. But there is a Easter egg, in case you did not notice. The 7 square blocks next to the rooms are Ai WaitWait font text, that might give suggestions on motives.
Even if I am critical towards some of the criticism, I appreciate that you have written down so many reviews, it is no small task.
Ayo! Thanks for the thoughtful feedback! Yeah not elaborating on the travels am was a choice to save space, hoping the arrows seal the deal. You are correct, let's see if I can spice up the rooms little for possible post jam version.
