This is one of the funniest ones to read, and also looks really great. Full marks and then some for polish. The only critical thing I can say there is that it needs some proofreading. (E.g. It's hunger -> Its hunger,  dopemine -> dopamine, targetting -> targeting). But the fact that I'm pointing out typos and spelling mistakes for this one and none of the others just says there's nothing else to pick at.

Weirdly, this is the second one back-to-back that got an actual laugh-out-loud from me on the cover. The chipper blurb followed by "WE'RE ALL LIKELY FUCKED" as a customer review is perfect tone-setting and genuinely caught me off guard in its delivery, which of course is the key to most successful humour.

The illustrations are super charming and the layout work is up there among the better entries.

I really like the approach of putting super-brief descriptors for each location on the first line followed by the more detailed description of the contents. It's both helpful for the Warden's own visualization and should keep the flow going at the table as it allows you to instantly give the players their first impression of the location while you read and refresh your memory of the details. I will probably steal that idea for a module at some point.

Weakest point is probably theme. Not that it's a bad theme, it's just that the connection to the jam is both obvious and shallowly implemented. "Something aquatic" is probably the first thing that sprang to many people's minds, and you're not playing with the actual water surface much (transitions from above/below water, things emerging out of the water, plunging into the deep, etc.) like some of the other aquatic ones. Outside of the context of the jam it's not an issue at all, but there are some other entries that really embraced the theme and wove it into the whole story. 

Usability is almost perfect... it'd certainly be easy to run the adventure once it's going, and everything's super easy to follow and set up for Warden convenience. What's a bit weak is maybe setup, denouement, and secondary plot arcs. Just respond to a distress call, show up and.... I guess kill the horror and steal the treasure chest? I think the biggest omission is NPC motivations and how much they know/care about what's going on . It seems like they're all just hanging out acting like everything's normal in a kinda surreal way. I notice the horror also ignores the scouts... does that mean it's the players' imagination? Who sent the distress call? I guess this is another one of those "we want the Warden and players to come up with those answers" things, but it does make it harder to run and prevents me from giving full marks for Usability.

This is really fun and madcap. It made me think a bit of the muppet show in a way (except quite a lot darker)! Enjoyed the descriptions of the locations and the variations in the random elements, which are well balanced. I did spot two typos - dopemine -> dopamine and it’s -> its (in front sheet text, is possessive form). The colour scheme, the layout and design is great. Particularly liked the way you handled the map. Great stuff!

Pinnacle absurdist dark comedy here with a distinctive and extremely sleek style! Very, very polished, excellent ordering of information. Tons of little details and subtle, handcrafted touches that highlight and compliment the writing. The custom horror element is really novel and each NPC is fleshed out just right for my tastes!

I'm concerned that some margins or bleed might be needed for a print version with how closely some info hews to the edges/fold lines, but that's about all I have critically! You've put together a really hilarious romp and I am very compelled to drop this on my table soon. Someone save that poor delicious blobfish...

Hello! First off I love the vibes of the pamphlet, it looks fantastic, it has a great sense of humor and it seems like it would be pretty easy to sit down and play. Great job! 

The only real critiques I have are;

1. I think while the statblocks have great info on the characters I think a little more could have been added mechanically, especially a combat score and damage they deal. 

2. The theme of "under the surface" was a little lacking, other than the adventure taking place at a sea-world equivalent. 

3. While I love the flavor of the introduction being in universe I think the adventure could have used a little more setup information. How long has it been since the creature got loose, what exactly the PCs are doing here, maybe a little more background on the station itself.

Other than those small critiques I think this is a great adventure and one I'm definitely interested in running. Great job!
 

This is a personal favorite of mine. Great in world content and flavour, the custom horror makes for a very replayable module, and the overall graphic design is super easy on the eyes and easy to follow. Only real point I have against this is the tangential relation to the Jams theme. Its in space, its vaguely water but not under the surface of anything. Consider placing this actually underwater, which would enhance the aquatic theming and horror. Otherwise amazing work!

This is a personal favorite of mine. Great in world content and flavour, the custom horror makes for a very replayable module, and the overall graphic design is super easy on the eyes and easy to follow. Only real point I have against this is the tangential relation to the Jams theme. Its in space, its vaguely water but not under the surface of anything. Consider placing this actually underwater, which would enhance the aquatic theming and horror. Otherwise amazing work!

I read through you jam entry. Here's my written commentary on your adventure content and layout:

---Cool map, easy to read and locate key NPCs

---Solid layout, easy to read and locate key information through the playthrough

---Cool horror generator, very monster of the week driven

---Something interesting happening in every room, and easy to improvise against

---Simple and effective rules for when Something Sinister Happens (2 rooms is a good measure)

Fintastic job, love it!