I read through you jam entry. Here's my written commentary on your adventure content and layout:
---Cool map, easy to read and locate key NPCs
---Solid layout, easy to read and locate key information through the playthrough
---Cool horror generator, very monster of the week driven
---Something interesting happening in every room, and easy to improvise against
---Simple and effective rules for when Something Sinister Happens (2 rooms is a good measure)