Really appealing and printer-friendly art direction! I do feel the text is a bit condensed to its detriment, though, and some columns are lack spacing between one another. The map legend is also pretty squished in there.

That aside, you've written some excellent body horror here! The dungeon essentially tells the story the company and their product - I think a lot of dungeons tend to miss that. The more you explore, the more you learn, and the worse things get. I also really, really enjoy the timeline of events, they're explosive without being railroady or too narrow. I get a good sense of the narrative arc a one-shot might take by reading them. Well considered and great work overall!

Overall I love the concept - theme is great and it's super creepy. If I were to run it, I would definitely focus the  Dupli-Skin marketing  around the product being  synthetically grown 100% ethical skin, to enhance the payoff when the players reach the den.  Both NPC and room descriptions were super evocative, and would be easy to run at the table in that sense - though tracking NPC movements may be a bit complicated. I would like to see an NPC to be keen on offering a free sample - or I would try to manufacture a situation where a pc needs to get Dupli-Skinned to save their life (just to make use of your infection table). I would also love to see you play up the horror on the events table. Rather than just npcs changing locations have them doing something at the same time (like farm staff transporting a  garbage bin filled with skinless corpses for disposal). 

It was a really enjoyable read, and look forward to running it at some point :)

Delightfully grotesque and thematic—best I've seen yet in that regard. I think Camilla in Skin Deep might be covered in Dupli-Skin ;-). Any other Skin entries in this jam? "Skin Trilogy" would be fun.

I think this is one where graphic design isn't just about aesthetics, but usability. In terms of looks, the most bothersome thing is the lack of space between some elements—a lot of things are smashed right up against something else, and there's no interior margin for the dark boxes, etc.

More importantly, though, some additional thought in terms of design and layout would go a long way to making some of the more complex mechanisms more Warden-friendly. For instance:

• The timeline shouldn't be on a separate page from the explanation of how it advances.
• One access card is mentioned in the cast of characters, another is in the location descriptions, and the lockdown protocol is in the timeline. Maybe access control deserves its own little block somewhere.
• The movement of the NPCs between their locations is also spread out throughout the module instead of being explained in one place.

There are maybe too many named NPCs, though I'm not sure of that. It is useful to have personality prompts when they turn out to be needed. However if the Warden actually tries to introduce and track the location of all those people, it's going to be a lot of mental overhead. I thought Skin Deep was bad for that, and you have more than twice as many as I do.

Instead of making the advancement of time a random encounter, you could make it happen whenever a duplicate encounter is rolled (instead of having that encounter a second time). That would avoid repetitive events and also naturally accelerate the pace of the plot if the players start doing too much backtracking, as the chances of a clock tick would go up each step.

Hey Headless-Press, please adjust the price of your module from “pay what you want” to Free for the duration of the Jam. afterwards you are allowed to monetize however you want. Thanks!