Yes! Glad to see you share my thoughts on Camilla probably having Dupli-Skin XD. I'm not sure, a Skin trilogy/Duology would be very fun ;)
Thanks for the feedback, it is all very helpful! The layout-adjacent issues are definitely the thing I was most unsure of, it is the element I am least confident in overall and I think that suffered a bit due to my rushed entry: The dark-box inner margin is something I have been meaning to sort out but didn't get around to this time, it is definitely on the list to amend post-jam.
The number of NPCs is a tricky one; having more staff makes the paranoia around the Dupli-Skin Walkers more potent, and I thought a more dynamic roster would work better than listing each in a specific location, but I can see the number of them being an issue.
I really like your suggestion for timeline advancement, I think I'll have to test it out when I run this one next!