Hiya! Reading this through now, taking some notes... here are those notes!
First thought is, what a great name for a module... i have to imagine you did one of those lean back in the chair moments when you came up with it
Oof the marketing-talk in the opener is making my... skin crawl (truly can't come up with a better term haha). Great work, from "skin deep" to "stalwart appliance," just vile haha. great stuff
oh wow we are NOT PULLING PUNCHES on the truth of dupliskin. damn. REAMS!! you are really picking some nasty words. hell yeah
the clock raises the stakes in a very satisfying way. room descriptions very evocative, i would hate being in this place even if there were no skin ghoul related shenanigans.
great body horror! not usually my subgenre but i like the way you presented this, kind of centered around the foul corporate sheen masking some real nasty business.