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Lol, that's pretty good.

I like the character of Dhouki, and it is an interesting set up for an adventure. I understand the player is going to be playing a specific character but in some parts, especially in part 2, it seems like you laid out exactly what the player should be doing. I like the star map and it is a very robust adventure, I could see it taking 3-4 sessions to complete. Nice work!

Thanks! People wanting to read/run it is all I could ask for. Thanks for the review!

Interesting design, very robust for such few words. I like the random encounters and the procedural aspect of the game lends. Some of the fonts are a little harsh, the font for the second page top left particularly. It was a little daunting reading it the first time, a lot of mechanics and proper names. But after reading the whole thing and going back to the more confusing parts I think it makes much more sense. I think it is a creative, robust take on the prompt and I would be interested in running it. It is also nice that it is repayable with the two objectives. Good job!

Very cool take on the prompt, the players literally can't remember who is after them. I also like the flashback mechanic. I think an editing pass would have been helpful. A nicely thought out story though and interesting characters. I also really like the names for the areas in the station.

I like the no killing aspect of the adventure, it makes for a much more interesting set of interactions that can happen. I think a some more detail would help a lot, especially in the events, I feel like the adventure leaves a little too much up to the GM. I think the different mercenary factions are well thought out and diverse. Nice work!

Nice moral dilemma with the infected dog, no one wants to hurt a dog.

I agree with Staggered Amusement. Nicely laid out, simple and robust procedures, easily runable, but some more description of the space beast or the other creatures would have been appreciated. Good work! 

I like it! The mechanics for the dog are great and it seems like a easy to run, fun little adventure. Nice work!

Really good thematic little adventure. Had me chuckling the entire time I was reading it. I'm excited to run this and it seems like it would be pretty easy/quick. I think that it could have used a little more sci-fi stuff, but I seriously love all the aesthetics! Got some real good Office Space vibes. Excellent work!

Thanks! Yeah that is def what I was going for. I'm glad the horrible flat pastel art is recognizable. Thanks for checking it out!

That's awesome to hear! I'm glad to hear it was as chaotic as I hoped it would be when I was designing it. Thanks for checking it out!

Thanks!