Lovely minimalist station design but still 'atmospheric'.  A fun sandbox and I'm particularly enamoured of the flashback idea.

Very cool take on the prompt, the players literally can't remember who is after them. I also like the flashback mechanic. I think an editing pass would have been helpful. A nicely thought out story though and interesting characters. I also really like the names for the areas in the station.

Makes an excellent first impression with the visual design. Watch out for typos though; they are extremely frequent, practically one per sentence. I think a pass for editing would help. The comma splices are really distracting in particular.