Ahoy! Here are some notes I took while reading -
Loving the flavour of these "handwritten" chunks all over. Really the tone of the entire piece. Funny without getting too silly, if that makes sense. Still treats the threats and setting with care while being an enjoyable read.
Art and layout and colours all look great. I chuckled at the faceless star scout heads, and the stamp coupon in particular.
Horror table is on point. Dangerous and funny!
Took me a second to put together that "employees have keycards" bit. That's mostly a me problem, not a you problem.
My only worry with my table is giving them the opportunity to "nope out" -- not much stopping them from turning around and leaving. Probably not an issue for most tables tho.
This is a fun take on the theme, and from the few I've read so far, a unique one! Really struggling to come up w/ any "constructive criticism," i think you've really built something complete and coherent and fun and special here :)