Fantastic job, I really enjoyed reading through this one! Currently top of the list submissions I want to run a playtest for asap, I'll make sure to write up a play report and link it to you if I do. Below are my general thoughts for each category, I rate with half points but downgrade it for the itch-io rating system. 

Polish - 4.5/5   

Great minimalist design. Simple but very slick. Agreed with the prior mentioned information ordering issue, but otherwise I feel like there's a good amount of information concisely formatted into the space a trifold allows. Easy to read through and I feel like I can immediately piece together how'd I run this adventure and wouldn't have to jump around too much to do so.

Favorability - 4.5/5

I really like how this is a simple scenario and threat that becomes incredibly complicated due to outside circumstances' outside of the players' control. There's an implied ticking time-bomb of the special cargo getting loose as the players limp around on backup power before their "rescue" that can easily be played up. The Foxtrot Uniform outfit showing up would very much be a moment of relief, quickly followed by confusion and horror as the mutiny sparks the main threat's escape from containment. One of those pamphlet adventures that I feel largely runs itself once you set fuse to the initial powder keg.  

Usability - 5/5 

I can see myself taking this and running a one-shot of it with minimal modification. The timeline is concise and sets a clear end state for the module and the list of NPCs provides ample opportunity for the Warden to involve players in the mutiny going on. As mention by a previous commentator the only issue is just finding an implied end state that doesn't involve the destruction of the squid or the abandoning of the ship. Maybe a provision where players will get paid half for successful securing of its corpse for research purposes? Or even an alternative reward offered by either side of the mutiny for recovering the valuable warp cores? It's cool if the original corpo job conditions end up seeming impossible (I can still see a group figuring something out depending on the loadouts they start with), but having those alternate win conditions written in could help with finding a proper ending for the adventure in play. 

Theme - 3/5   

The octopus is an interesting connection to make for the theme, but I think outside of it being a mostly normal (albeit killer version) of an octopus doesn't make it feel as strongly related as it could be. Especially considering the adventure takes place across two space-ships otherwise unrelated to the theme. The initial pirate theming Foxtrot Uniform haves also feels a bit weak. I feel like the concept of mutinies and piracy would already be well-known to a group who base themselves off of the pirates of Earth and there's not much else that screams "they're pirates" to me outside of some of their call-signs.

Super clean design. Maybe it'd be nice to have a version with some colour. Slight information ordering issue in that if you read the cover, then the inner flap, then everything else, it's not totally clear when you read the section on Fox Uniform that this is an entirely NPC group and not the players' crewmates.

I got it, but might need to be spelled out a little more that any warning to the FUs that they let a Bad Thing out would be an NDA violation and void any payment the players might get. 

At the same time, I feel like there needs to be a way to subdue the octopode and complete the contract, as if they're going to have to kill it anyway, they might as well just violate the NDA immediately. I guess maybe the intent is the players can trap it in the exterior cargo container of the Vulpes, but they won't know about that ship's layout at the time they're first making the decision to spill the beans or not.

I think with the right group of role-players, there's the potential for some real hilarity as they try to plan with each other in front of the FUs without saying the word "octopus." But I think a high chance in many groups the NDA's broken immediately and the scenario just turns into a lot of fighting.

Anyway, very impressed overall. Main criticism is that I'm not sure how well it fits the jam theme. I guess octopuses are underwater creatures, and there's tension "under the surface" of the FU co-op, etc., but I feel like I have to stretch to convince myself it fits.