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I understand the ordering of the flaps, as mine is the same. That's what I'm saying though.

As you read it, you get the inner flap with the Vulpes ship and the Fox Uniform crew before you read the interior. However, that means you're reading "Fox Uniform" before getting to "The Job."

The result of that, for me at least, was that I initially assumed that the players were part of Fox Uniform and would be aboard the Vulpes, dealing with a mutiny among their own crew. 

Then I got to The Job and didn't immediately notice that it was referencing a different ship, so I thought the Octopode was in that exterior cargo compartment. It was only when I got to "Now" and the sentence "Fox Uniform, a mercenary outfit, picked up your distress signal" that I realized that no, the players are on a different ship and Fox Uniform is who's coming to get them.

I realize this is partly my own fault because the cover blurb does say "Now, your ship is dead, and half the rescue crew decided today was the day that they were going to become pirates." However, I still think it would be helpful either to better establish the players' situation before introducing Fox Uniform, or include a phrase like "...who respond to the players' distress signal" in the Fox Uniform description to reinforce that they're the outside party in the scenario.