hiya, here are some stray notes i wrote while reading this!
"finally, an easy job" hahaha you love to see it. surely this won't go sideways! oop that didn't take long
loving these crew names. also the art is lovely, love the octopode. "aw he seems nice" i say before i read any of the accompanying text
the timeline is great, this plays out a lot like many of my fave cyberpunk-type adventures where every step forward is accompanied by 100 steps of walking-backwards-into-hell
yeah i knew that octopode wouldn't play nice. dang that's a scary guy
the competing motivations of the foxes are such a great playground for messing around. feel like there's enough here to, once you've internalized it, react to player intervention swiftly and true-to-character
great stuff!