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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| THEME — How well is the jam theme used? | #15 | 3.136 | 3.222 |
| GAME DESIGN — How good is the game balance or concepts there in? | #22 | 3.299 | 3.389 |
| FAVORABILITY — how much do you personally like the submission? | #25 | 2.812 | 2.889 |
| WRITING — How does this read? does it emanate with horror, humor, drama...? | #27 | 2.758 | 2.833 |
| Overall | #29 | 2.704 | 2.778 |
| ART — How good is the art/graphic design? | #30 | 2.109 | 2.167 |
| LAYOUT — How well does the module get across information? | #31 | 2.217 | 2.278 |
| UTILITY — Does complexity inspire game prep? Or Is it very "Pick-up-n-Play"? | #31 | 2.596 | 2.667 |
Ranked from 18 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Comments
I understand it looks imposing. I wanted to create something without a predefined story. My rooms are not a progression, but sets on a stage. The play is pretty much up to the group, I merely seed a little tension. And that is challenging to run. I like that. But it is not a five room dungeon with BBEG shielding the loot. I am hoping it can be inspiration to run a very personal improvised story in a Dream campaign or standalone.
I think there is a lot of good stuff here to enjoy, but I think the overall package could use some work in getting across your intentions for the module from an earlier point. Laying out for the warden who is running it, a quick and concise “Here is what is going on, Here is how it will likely effect your players, think about running this in this way” would go a long way to helping the readability of the module as a whole.
Again some very fun ideas, love the use of genera shifting to make things unsettling and weird in great way!
An expedition to an asteroid to get some ice, absolutely jam packed with ideas. I love the water entity, which reminds me of the all-timer Doctor Who episode Waters of Mars. The idea of everything being projections is cool, as is the idea of the resetting and the potential for becoming one yourself.
The weakness of the module is perhaps that it tries to do too much within the available space. It would have been great to get some more information on the rooms of the projection, and the additions of the machine virus and NPC memories could have used a bit more explanation and room to breathe. I miss a clear path presenting all the information I need to run it in an easy-to-use format. I think this could really shine if expanded to a 12-16 page zine rather than a trifold.
I was also happy to see the EYE FRIENDLY version, because the text/background contrast on the TECHNICOLOR version was not always ideal for reading.
An expedition to an asteroid to get some ice, absolutely jam packed with ideas. I love the water entity, which reminds me of the all-timer Doctor Who episode Waters of Mars. The idea of everything being projections is cool, as is the idea of the resetting and the potential for becoming one yourself.
The weakness of the module is perhaps that it tries to do too much within the available space. It would have been great to get some more information on the rooms of the projection, and the additions of the machine virus and NPC memories could have used a bit more explanation and room to breathe. I miss a clear path presenting all the information I need to run it in an easy-to-use format. I think this could really shine if expanded to a 12-16 page zine rather than a trifold.
I was also happy to see the EYE FRIENDLY version, because the text/background contrast on the TECHNICOLOR version was not always ideal for reading.
(+) Super interesting premise for a horror that gives a true slow burn to let the players uncover the truth
(+) Lots of diverse mechanics that let the setting and scenario evolve and take interesting turns through the session
(+) Lots of presented information to help run an otherwise complicated premise
- i love the entity ! it is honestly great! the projections ,the reflection of the players psyche and the fact it takes stress too and does panic attacks is a really great twist and makes me want to use him !
- the blending of machine and flesh is also nice ! makes my second module psychoware, could be a great way to create one ! well if the players survives haha
- i found the npc death memories hard to read or understand but that might have bin the idea ?.
- the rest of the module is pretty fun, love when times end all wounds appear making for a gruesome moment !
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