(+) A fun setting that has an appropriate scene opener before things delve into chaos

(+) Clever ticking time mechanic to ensure the games run fast and get to the action faster

(+) Diverse amount of outcomes that can shape to a unique game

A gorgeous little module about a party gone wrong, with additional “hyperfast” rules to speed up progression.

I really like the setup of a conman selling a machine to kill and “clone” the victim, but I think the execution becomes a bit messy, spending a lot of space on presenting different ways to run the party, rather than focusing on one, and fleshing it out with useful information. The module could also have used some editing for language, as several passages seem unclear to me. Some instructions also go against standard Mothership convention, e.g. “Everyone rolls a Sanity save. The lowest one automatically rolls a PANIC CHECK”, as usually rolling low is good.

All in all, I think this could form the skeleton of a fun module, but could use a little tightening up to really shine.

A very fun module! I think you use random encounters to good effect here, and I think that the Hyperspeed gameplay is an interesting idea! (i’ll have to see it in play to know my thoughts on it, but it seems positive!)

A small “me” thing is i’d love to see the map redone in a bit more of a “Sci-Fi” style… i don’t know why we can’t have sensible room shapes in sci-fi but we just can’t, okay!? haha jokes aside just a bit of sci-fi texture on the module could help to set the mood.

There were a few typos, the one that comes to mind was on the phone calendar you have Tuesday twice (Tuesday and Thursday are both listed as TUE). I think there needs to be a little bit of polishing, but overall I think you have a smart module on your hands!

I think the Hyperfast system is ingenious! Also, I hadn’t previously considered mashing Clue and Mothership together, and now my mind is blown. I do think this module could use another editing pass, and I unfortunately couldn’t read the random table footnote on the second page very well because of the font treatment. Overall, though, this is super cool!

I really like the hyperfast idea. I was toying with some variations on it where players are not told the rules just that they take stress at first every 10 actions, then every 5, etc. It might be getting to convoluted to keep it fluid at that point.

The design to this is slick! I do really like the premise of Hyperfast but I think it'd take a play of it for me to grok it.

I wish there were some NPC names but I suppose any name generator would do the trick.

Also I noticed there's a point where you say "everyone rolls a body save. Lowest one automatically rolls a Panic Check" do you mean highest here? Mosh being a roll under system.

Also I LOVE the tables you've included at the bottom of the pages. They're packed full of great gameable material.

First time hearing about HYPERFAST. I'm intrigued and would love to try it out!

The design and layout are beautiful and functional. The module setup and writing are very flavorful and over the top in a good way. 

Sidenote: I feel the action economy and the failing states make the game more about getting in and out of a crazy situation, so not sure if more "level design" would add to the experience or not. Prep/running the game advice could be useful!