(+) Excellent use of the layout to deliver maps and tables while optimizing space for writing

(+) Lots of diverse locations with great mechanical implications in each

(+) Great details on the head staff and the various guests staying here, offering lots of good points to develop a narrative out of

Very nicely done! I think there is a lot here to offer and probably the module i like most for Utility as i can see myself fitting the Seven Sigma (7Σ) into a lot of places. Some nitpicks to hopefully help you polish up a post jam version:

1. the words breaking in line wrapping (split hyphenated words) is hard to read and is one of the few things lacking clean polish in this design. its almost more jarring because of how well everything else looks.
2. Orphan words, the other point against your polish, you have a fair few orphaned words (a single word that sits on a line alone) you can easily clean these up with some editing to tighten up the writing (or in rare cases add a little… you are already using the space, might as well use it!.. but in general tightening is the better way to go!) just for reference i quickly counted 8 lines taken up by orphaned words… that is essentially the size of “Carson’s Lockdown Procedure” on panel 5, worth of space that can be reclaimed here (which can be used for my point No. 8!)
3. Change the character’s name from Ram OR change how the drones attack (it states that small drones can “Ram” but are better as scouts) its a small thing but its a point of confusion that you just don’t need, especially when you can easily change one of these two things with little effort.
4. and on the subject of Ram the character, swap Lain and Ram’s numbers, so Lain becomes No. 6 and Ram becomes No.7. The reason to do this is that Ram’s description box specifically talks about Lain which while reading makes you go “who is lain?” which takes you out of the experience even for a second, where as if you read about Lain and then read about Ram you will not be confused at all. simple swap!
5. your highlighted text looks clipped at the top, just extend the highlight box up a bit (unless this is a stylistic choice i’m just not getting)
6. very small thing, but Mothership doesn’t really use d4s and d6s… its not a deal breaker but sticking with the d5 or d10 is generally the way to go! and i think 5 floors instead of 6 but with 5 rooms each works just as well… but again very small thing.
7. the module doesn’t NEED cover art, but its a nice enough piece that i think a little bit of cover art to give potential buyers a vibe of what lies within would be worth taking the time to make/procure!
8. okay most important for last, you worked so hard in making this plug-n-play that i think you removed a bit of the desire to SPECIFICALLY engage with it by not offering at least a specific story hook to start things going! I agree with Deimoscope in their comment with the plot hooks… i’d say choose one and write it up as a “HEY DO THIS” and then offer the others as options… i think you can fit that in based on the space currently.

and there you go, thats my 2¢ hope it helps!

This is very good! All it is missing is one table:

1 - Get Taka's corporate secrets without anybody noticing

2 - Document Joseph's big deal for the feds

3 - Prevent Lain from destroying the Seven Sigma

4 - Get Kristoff off his screen, find Kelm a place to stay, and reunite Rita with her granddaughter

5 - Find out who killed Grantham

6 - Prevent Interplanetary(R)(TM) from taking over the Seven Sigma

This is one of my favorite submissions I’ve reviewed so far, as well as one I’d love to see at a table, as either a GM or player. The layout is so clean I could eat off it. My tiny nitpick is that I’d do away with the hyphens because I think they’re a little jarring.

One final note: I love your inclusion of an Appendix N! I think incorporating touchstones is a fantastic shorthand to get a GM’s synapses firing. (And I’m delighted by the unexpected Downton Abbey name drops!)

A module describing an automated hotel run by an AI. The human owner has died, but nobody else is aware of this.The layout is great and easy to use, and the locations are good and interactive. Underlining and highlighting works well to draw the eye to the important bit (though the highlighting seems slightly misaligned with the font).

There’s sure to be a lot of fun to be had in this hotel, though I am left missing two things: there are no real hooks to bring the PCs here or make them explore the location, and the owner’s death is mostly unexplained. He is located in a cryopod “tampered with” to kill the person inside, but it is unclear if he has done this to take his own life, or if someone else has murdered him (and if so, why).

All in all, a great hotel to visit, you just need to bring your own “why”s.

This is nice and useful for any warden - evokes the hotel and AI from Altered Carbon very strongly. Needs a hook, and it's very unclear who killed Grantham and why. But maybe that's deliberate? The setting and NPCs are great and very usable in any campaign, but the "what's going on?" would require work by the Warden. 

This is very well written and a lot of the information is very clear. I wish there was just one more plot thread to pull on that would really kick things in motion. As it stands, it looks like it relies on the crew uncovering that Grantham is dead OR getting hired by Lain.

The fully automated hotel with a murder mystery is a great setting and I do really enjoy the effort that went into all of the NPCs. 

The versatility of this is excellent! I could see some of this stuff being transplanted into Hardlight Station even.

I like this a lot! A quirky hotel to serve as a recurring locale that also doubles as a murder mystery and an AI server heist is quite clever for something as small as a trifold. The drones having prices - turning a small bestiary into a shopping list - is brilliantly concise design. 

If I could complain about anything, I wish there was a small crumb of Stress relief called out for staying in the hotel and enjoying it, but that's honestly nitpicky. Great work!

• love the idea of a automated hotel this is great !
• love the addition of prices and sizes for the drones, same for the services  and not to forget the "what happens during a shutdown" is great.
• the font and text all look amazing to me.
• honestly this is a great hotel setting i really like it.