Thank you so much for the comment! I'm very glad you like it :)
The feedback is appreciated! By hyphens do you mean the ones in the Location description headings or the word/line breaks or something else? (or all the hyphens?) I'm kinda 50/50 on the headings - I like them but don't feel like they're necessarily the best choice, but I dislike the word breaks - perhaps in a 2nd layout pass I can clean those up.
TBH it was a challenge not to add more Downton Abbey references! This makes me wonder how that setup would look like as a sci-fi horror adventure - maybe something to explore in another trifold...