This is one of my favorite submissions I’ve reviewed so far, as well as one I’d love to see at a table, as either a GM or player. The layout is so clean I could eat off it. My tiny nitpick is that I’d do away with the hyphens because I think they’re a little jarring.
One final note: I love your inclusion of an Appendix N! I think incorporating touchstones is a fantastic shorthand to get a GM’s synapses firing. (And I’m delighted by the unexpected Downton Abbey name drops!)
Thank you so much for the comment! I'm very glad you like it :)
The feedback is appreciated! By hyphens do you mean the ones in the Location description headings or the word/line breaks or something else? (or all the hyphens?) I'm kinda 50/50 on the headings - I like them but don't feel like they're necessarily the best choice, but I dislike the word breaks - perhaps in a 2nd layout pass I can clean those up.
TBH it was a challenge not to add more Downton Abbey references! This makes me wonder how that setup would look like as a sci-fi horror adventure - maybe something to explore in another trifold...
