Feedback in comments (from 2025-12-11.)

Oh, by the way, I forgot to mention, there is a typo (or an inconsistency?) in the description of a photo in the Living Room. It says "Younger Grantham and the woman in the lobby of the hotel." It should probably say "and a woman", since we don't yet know her. If the description is about a woman who we've seen in the lobby (and not a photo taken in the lobby,) then the lobby is missing her description (is there a portrait or a statue in her honor there?) Also, there are "Photos of Grantham, his wife, and young son" on the walls. If that is who Marianne is, the she might be "the woman in the (other) photos".

P.S. This review is private to the two of us, apparently, which is why I wrote that here.

P.P.S. It is an outrage Itch won't let me copy and paste in this window!

Feedback in comments (from 2025-12-11.)

Oh, by the way, I forgot to mention, there is a typo (or an inconsistency?) in the description of a photo in the Living Room. It says "Younger Grantham and the woman in the lobby of the hotel." It should probably say "and a woman", since we don't yet know her. If the description is about a woman who we've seen in the lobby (and not a photo taken in the lobby,) then the lobby is missing her description (is there a portrait or a statue in her honor there?) Also, there are "Photos of Grantham, his wife, and young son" on the walls. If that is who Marianne is, the she might be "the woman in the (other) photos".

P.S. This review is private to the two of us, apparently, which is why I wrote that here.

P.P.S. It is an outrage Itch won't let me copy and paste in this window!