The design to this is slick! I do really like the premise of Hyperfast but I think it'd take a play of it for me to grok it.
I wish there were some NPC names but I suppose any name generator would do the trick.
Also I noticed there's a point where you say "everyone rolls a body save. Lowest one automatically rolls a Panic Check" do you mean highest here? Mosh being a roll under system.
Also I LOVE the tables you've included at the bottom of the pages. They're packed full of great gameable material.