I like the overall idea especially the Entity! However the layout is a bit hard to read for me and thank you for the eye friendly version. Maybe I’m a bit old school but I would have preferred less content more focused on less ideas.
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I understand it looks imposing. I wanted to create something without a predefined story. My rooms are not a progression, but sets on a stage. The play is pretty much up to the group, I merely seed a little tension. And that is challenging to run. I like that. But it is not a five room dungeon with BBEG shielding the loot. I am hoping it can be inspiration to run a very personal improvised story in a Dream campaign or standalone.