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Doc, you have another banger on your hands… even with giving you a 1 in theme (the lowest you can give) you still managed to be among the higher scores i’ve given in my personal notes (where i can rate things with .5s as God intended!)

I will sit down and give you detailed notes as promised once the Jam is over, but my quick note is, you currently have a few points of “Blank” space that look a little odd, and i think with some creative reworking of where things are located in the layout might be able to fit together to actually give you a little more writing space.

And to that point, the extra writing space could be used to create some suggestions on how to journal, or maybe some rules as to gaining integrity via journalling or some such…

regardless you’ve made another fantastic module! congrats!

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Thank you, that means a lot! I'll have to show the newest version of the module, because the new font change has taken up lot more space. But, makes it a lot easier to read through now. I'm still keen to hear these notes, as I may still be able to shuffle and trim things around.