Cute game ! Like others said, the camera could use to be a little lower, and maybe more zoomed out ? Other than that, pretty good entry, i liked it !
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Factory Failure's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Audio | #502 | 3.240 | 3.240 |
| Theme | #624 | 3.200 | 3.200 |
| Enjoyment | #807 | 3.080 | 3.080 |
| Overall | #818 | 3.007 | 3.007 |
| Visuals | #888 | 3.120 | 3.120 |
| Gameplay | #889 | 2.800 | 2.800 |
| Innovation | #1092 | 2.600 | 2.600 |
Ranked from 25 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
How does the game fit the theme?
Your boss assures you that nothing can go wrong. Spoiler: things go wrong.
What code and assets did you not make from scratch during the jam (if any)?
Sprites, animations and audio.
How many people worked on the game?1
Comments
Like other people said, I would move the camera a bit down so I can see where the player is landing. Other than that, it's a fun platformer. The buttons made me chuckle lol
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Lead on ArrivalPretty fun game! But i find the camera position while jamp little bit weird. But it's still a pretty fun and short game. Well done!
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Return HomeIt's a fun short game, I wish it was longer and with a few more buttons.
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Gravity stallFun little game. I think the camera could be a bit more zoomed out and the game fleshed out a little more. But you have good foundations here! You also had nice music. Nice job!
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A Knight at the InnShort and funny game. I suggest you adjust the graphics, because different sprites have different detail and it's a bit weird. Also make the camera predict where the player is going. Last - adding more mechanics would be great because game is too short! Anyway, good job!
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Please, Finish This Game!Nice game. Music and sounds work really well. I'd have liked a little bit more in view below me (couldn't see the monsters to land on), but generally a sweet little game.
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Don't Drink and DiveIt creates a lot of excitement! I'm not sure how big the map is, but I didn’t get to explore all of it. I played for quite a while, though. It’s a great idea!
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Clean it [BrackeysGameJam]Nice take on the theme! To add to other suggestions, I would also suggest to increase the gravity scale of the player character so they don’t seem like they’re moving on the moon (and maybe add different jump heights based on how long you press the jump button). The music was very enjoyable!
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UnPhasedReally cool game, I liked the take on the theme. If I were to give some advice, I would recommend to make the camera follow the player better, rn it's just sticked to the player, having it follow smoothly, and having some deadzone (so it doesn't follow when we just jump), would be nice. Also leaps of faith aren't the best idea imo, a lot of the times I thought I was jumping to my death, instead I was just progressing lol.
But overall really fun game, I enjoyed it :D
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Ana The TraineeI love the 8bit music. The game also have implemented the theme well.
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Nhong bee CarReally nice visuals! I also quite like the music. well done on your game! +1 rating
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Save YourselfNice job on the game - that was a lot to pull together! It took a second to find all the controls, but I probably missed instructions at the beginning.
I hope you'll have a look at one or two games from this jam I helped with:
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Factory FlawNice job on the game - that was a lot to pull together! It took a second to find all the controls, but I probably missed instructions at the beginning.
I hope you'll have a look at one or two games from this jam I helped with:
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Factory FlawInteresting game! I think I'd like more if the camera had a little less zoom and character speed was a little higher, but had a great time!
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Fling & FortuneTruly nothing can go wrong, whichever button I pressed XD. I only realized there's no RED button that says OPEN when I played it a second time haha! Cool little platformer, well done!
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