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A jam submission

Factory FailureView game page

Just another day at your boring job. Surely nothing can go wrong… right?
Submitted by DeianT (@DeianTeze) — 5 hours, 52 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Audio#5023.2403.240
Theme#6243.2003.200
Enjoyment#8073.0803.080
Overall#8183.0073.007
Visuals#8883.1203.120
Gameplay#8892.8002.800
Innovation#10922.6002.600

Ranked from 25 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

How does the game fit the theme?
Your boss assures you that nothing can go wrong. Spoiler: things go wrong.

What code and assets did you not make from scratch during the jam (if any)?
Sprites, animations and audio.

How many people worked on the game?
1

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Submitted(+1)

Cute game ! Like others said, the camera could use to be a little lower, and maybe more zoomed out ? Other than that, pretty good entry, i liked it !

Submitted(+1)

Like other people said, I would move the camera a bit down so I can see where the player is landing. Other than that, it's a fun platformer. The buttons made me chuckle lol

Submitted(+1)

Short and fun platformer game, gj!

Submitted

Pretty fun game! But i find the camera position while jamp little bit weird. But it's still a pretty fun and short game. Well done!

Developer

Thanks for playing!

Submitted

It's a fun short game, I wish it was longer and with a few more buttons.

Developer(+1)

Thanks, I wanted to make it longer. but didn't have time.

Submitted(+1)

Good job for a one-person game.

Submitted

Fun little game. I think the camera could be a bit more zoomed out and the game fleshed out a little more. But you have good foundations here! You also had nice music. Nice job!

Developer

Thanks for your comment!

Submitted

Short and funny game. I suggest you adjust the graphics, because different sprites have different detail and it's a bit weird. Also make the camera predict where the player is going. Last - adding more mechanics would be great because game is too short! Anyway, good job!

Developer

Thanks for the comment, appreciate the feedback.

Submitted(+1)

hi! rated.

Submitted(+1)

Nice game. Music and sounds work really well. I'd have liked a little bit more in view below me (couldn't see the monsters to land on), but generally a sweet little game. 

Submitted

It creates a lot of excitement! I'm not sure how big the map is, but I didn’t get to explore all of it. I played for quite a while, though. It’s a great idea!

Developer

Thanks for playing!

Submitted(+1)

A nice take on the theme! Nice Game!

Submitted

Nice take on the theme! To add to other suggestions, I would also suggest to increase the gravity scale of the player character so they don’t seem like they’re moving on the moon (and maybe add different jump heights based on how long you press the jump button). The music was very enjoyable!

Developer

Thanks! Appreciate the feedback!

Submitted

Really cool game, I liked the take on the theme. If I were to give some advice, I would recommend to make the camera follow the player better, rn it's just sticked to the player, having it follow smoothly, and having some deadzone (so it doesn't follow when we just jump), would be nice. Also leaps of faith aren't the best idea imo, a lot of the times I thought I was jumping to my death, instead I was just progressing lol.

But overall really fun game, I enjoyed it :D

Developer(+1)

Thanks for the feedback!

Submitted

I love the 8bit music. The game also have implemented the theme well.

Developer

Thanks for your comment! Glad you liked it.

Submitted

Really nice visuals! I also quite like the music. well done on your game! +1 rating

Developer

Glad you liked it!

Submitted(+1)

Nice job on the game - that was a lot to pull together! It took a second to find all the controls, but I probably missed instructions at the beginning.

I hope you'll have a look at one or two games from this jam I helped with: 

https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-13/rate/3348622

https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-13/rate/3348436

Submitted

Nice job on the game - that was a lot to pull together! It took a second to find all the controls, but I probably missed instructions at the beginning.

I hope you'll have a look at one or two games from this jam I helped with: 

https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-13/rate/3348622

https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-13/rate/3348436

Submitted

Interesting game! I think I'd like more if the camera had a little less zoom and character speed was a little higher, but had a great time!

Developer

Thanks for your feedback!

Submitted

Truly nothing can go wrong, whichever button I pressed XD. I only realized there's no RED button that says OPEN when I played it a second time haha! Cool little platformer, well done!

Developer(+1)

Thanks for your comment!

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