video:

tl;dw

cute, fun. I enjoy. wanty more. idk how to get bone on top. y-invert camera angle plz. maybe make levels more dynamic like if u activate a switch it fills water in the canal and unlocks more of the area. ok thanks gl next 

Cute mario clone that also feels incredibly stiff because there's no acceleration based on momentum, but also felt fluid because of the airdash so I had my fun doing movement tech

There's a bug in the menu option where if you press ESC the main menu draws on top of the options

Sound wise the music is too loud (default was set at minimum) and there's an absence of ambient noises making the level feel empty.

There are two movement speed which are walking and running, since there is no acceleration i find useless to walk and I've played the demo keeping shift held the whole time

There's is also some weird thing happening in this area but never got softlocked  

I think overall is nice and before deciding on what kind of movement implement in the future you should have already decided if you want to make levels more vertically (precise jumps) or horizontally (speed)

Also while dropping to bottomless pits I can move the camera upward and see the terrain from the bottom without lower faces rendered.

Plays fine, looks good, didn't encounter any issues. Personally I really don't like the sound for picking up the bones.

-Portal loading is a bit awkward. Maybe add some particles(or scroll the background) and wind ambience so it looks less like she's floating there.

-Hitbox on big red button is too small. I jumped into it and nothing happened, then I dashed into it and nothing happened. Made be question if it was real, and having to do the platforming again is mildly annoying.

-Nearly didn't realize the ledge was meant to be shimmied to find a bone. Maybe add a gate to show said bone so the player knows there's a goal to notice. Though, in the full game being introduced to shimmy spots earlier may also suffice.

-Ground pounding doesn't seem to do much, since my air control felt pretty good I didn't think to use it as a stopper.

-Got all bones, the hardest being the one on the red and white pillar house thing by the enemy and signs. Not sure if I did it wrong. One method was to high jump then wall jump and dash to get onto the middle of the pillar, then high jumping and dashing onto the thin corner on the outside to shimmy up the roof. The other way, which I actually managed, was to jump into the window, then weirdly high jumping so I went up the outside wall instead of bonking my head. Both of these feel wrong, so idk if I just missed something obvious or not.

Really cool demo, got everything except the big bone at the top of the building that has the two signs. I missed the red button the first time I entered the tower and collected all the bones around the upper level, you should make it stand out a little bit more, maybe with a faint glowing pulse, scale it up or perhaps it's just skill issue on my part (reminder that gamers never look up).

Controls were nice, I feel like I'm holding shift all the time, perhaps you could invert walking and running? (maybe making it a toggle within the options menu), I'm partial about the skid or slide the character makes when changing directions, it can be easily bypassed if you let go of the movement key you're holding before moving on the opposite direction, so it's not a big deal, perhaps you plan on adding a side flip like in Mario 64.

Another small nitpick: I think the shrinking of the character on every jump is a bit too much

I don't know if it's my GPU(GTX 970) but I had this graphical bug with the portal at the start of the game.

Overall it's a really fun platformer, the texture work is phenomenal, I really liked the bluish hues of the cave passages, the art style is on point, you will be getting that a lot. Good luck with development!!

Works fine, plays well. Got all the bones. Only the roof one was tricky and I have no idea what the intended route was.

I managed to find a bug that blocks your ability to jump, reproducible by jumping and immediately crouching. Can softlock you unless you find a ledge to fall from to execute the buffered butt slam.

The button was tough to press, I had to cheese it by wall climbing from the bottom and then dashing.

Ok, loved that game.

Positives first : 

• The controls feels really good. No problems at all to move around, nice coyote time, nice responsiveness.
• Level design (even if I assume this is more of a test level) is pretty cool. Simple enough , but still with somewhat challenging platforming and small secrets to collect all bones.
• Like the music, was bobbing my head in rhythm while playing.
• Animation feels great and polished. Maybe the jump is a bit too "squishy"? It surprised me at first, but you get used to it.
• Good doggo.

Some small negatives : 

• I didn't know the control (could have probably checked the game page to be honest) so I discovered the "dash in mid-air" option VERY late. So yeah, know that you can obtain every single bones in your game without that option beside the 2 small bones and 1 big bone which are only accessible by hitting the big red button (maybe my "challenging" platforming wasn't so challenging actually...). So yeah, a control scheme explained somewhere would be nice... I think if it was part of the UI while playing it could be nice.
• Obviously, a sound effect when collecting bones and big bones would also be really nice, but that's a given.
• When I was close to the end of the demo, my fingers hurt a bit from maintaining the Right Trigger on my controller, as well as spamming combinations of A+X to move around, or A+B to jump high (XBOX controller). Not sure how to fix that to be honest... Maybe move the "dash in mid-air" to one of the bumpers and add an option to not have to hold the sprint button?

Anyway, got every bones, nice demo, would play again.

First time playing it so I didn't know the possible moves, but they all came to me naturally based on map layout (except the last one, couldn't figure that out on my own). Good level design for teaching how to play.

This gap in rocks looks like an access to a secret area. 

Sometimes camera is really choppy. I think it might be happening when it colliders with the terrain? I don't think it's visible in the video because it's 30fps.

Why are small bones made out of weird neon energy, and big bones are normal?

Brown slabs textures in the building, next to mouse, look weird. Like they're too big compared to other things and lack detail. And windows look like they're supposed to form an arch, but they're squares.

Character model, textures, sfx and animations are super good. Very cute.

That was a good start. I really like it, especially that one last big bone on top of that white house. Bone need a mastery of the control to get it lol. Well done. But i feel like the regular run's speed is too slow compared to sprinting, but that's just me

Also the rat dude T-posed when im in range of his vision, but not close enough for him to chase me

surprisingly charming. got all bones big and small. I like how some of the last ones felt like you had to push the movement system to its limits, like getting up the pillar with the balcony halfway up and the overhang that made me need to jump to the side of the sloped roof since it was lower.

Played it. Works on my AMD radeon R3  turdbox.

It's ok. I had 12 minutes of entertainment. I liked how playable it was on such a crappy computer.

Absolutely charming, but the sky box need a redo

->Couldn't find how to push the button

->Couldn't activate the pannel 

this looks amazing now, you really have locked in the style

just missing some enemies and more things to do than just collecting bones

Melkino. I've never played this before, though I watched it on stream. It's come a long way, especially aesthetically. It looks really, really good. It's actually inspirational, so great job!

I played it on keyboard because I'm too lazy to plug in a controller. I know it would feel better with controller, so I won't fault the m+kb controls too much--one big thing though, is that you should be able to toggle running with caps lock or whatever. If you don't have a fancy keyboard, you can't hold run, a direction, AND jump at the same time (limit to key presses or something). So being able to toggle run would fix that.

Second big controls things, the controls display in the test room is really helpful, it should be on screen in the main game view, but hideable. If that's too much, at least have it on the options screen. I never would have thought to left click to air dash, otherwise.

Nitpick time:

• Some of the textures seem too pixelated in comparison to the others. I don't know if it's a filtering thing, or if I'm just going crazy, but this picture shows what I mean, if you look at the white stones on the grass and the bits of grass on the stone compared to the stone.
  
• This texture is kind of an optical illusion, it looks like it's a slope but there's a little wall there. Spooky. Super nitpicky.
• Some text on the loading screen might make it look better. A level name, or just "Loading...", to make it not seem like the game is frozen or something. I'm sure it's a WIP, of course.
• When you move the camera 180 by pressing R, it kind of goes into the ground for a second. You probably are aware of this.
• Sounds super nitpicky, but the camera should be turned 180 degree at the very start. I don't see any reason to be facing that direction, unless you want to teach the player about the camera? It just feels too weird.

Less of a nitpick, something about the MC's design bugs me, and I THINK it's that the legs are too long. I think more chibi proportions would feel more "platformer main character" like. 

When running, I think she looks a lot better, because of the different proportions. Take it with a grain of salt, of course. The animations are very cute overall!

Melkino/10, well done!

GIGASOVL

fun movement. cute character, animations, world. some really ball busting jumps with really precise timing, more than necessary imo. Maybe you could extend the time in the peak of the wallrun before sliding down, it seems jumps are tuned to really nail max height.