Very witty and unexpected at many intervals - this was a short, sweet and engaging game - nice job!

Oh, and thanks for allowing the player to leave a note which then gets read back, that cracked me up!

overall a pretty nice game! I was definitely not expecting the plot to go the way it did. 

This game is the most amazing thing I've played so far. I laughed my BUTT off at almost every moment in the game. I brooded sooooo long it was a heck of a time. And the spaghetti mini-game was SOOOOOO GOOOD! It was so hard to multi-task the spaghetti and the conversation, but I loved it SO MUCH! I really really want to see what this would be like as a whole complete game, the writing and the pacing was sooooooooooo phenomenal and you see from the image that I really had fun with this game.

One thing I noticed with the dialogue was that you could see the entire dialogue for a frame before the text actually did its scrolling. I highly recommend https://yarnspinner.dev/ for dialogue management (this jam was my first time using it) and I found that it's really powerful and that it made iterative testing with dialogue so easy. (It's what Night in the Woods and A Short Hike uses and it's open source). It also took me a bit of trial-and-error to realize what I was supposed to click to advance the dialogue.

Other that nitpick, y'all really scoped and executed this perfectly! I love it soo much :D This game really made my night

Reasons I love this game:

- I love noir

- I totally ship the two main characters

- I laughed actually the entire time. Dialogue was classic. 

The only issue I had is that the text boxes were occasionally a little buggy. Also, I think a default text would pop up for like a millisecond before the real text appeared. Great job on this game, it blew my expectations out of the water.

Ok, i was actually impressed with how the plot evolved hahaha. The dinner scene was actually tense, and the final shootout felt like a twist inside a twist, i think.
Not much to say than just well done, I liked the art, sound and theme, pretty funny too, just seems that after the ending the game seems to freeze, maybe it's only in my end, but its nothing that refreshing the page doesn't fix, congrats!

The writing is awesome. The music and the drawings too.

I loved the lunch part, when you need to do two things at the same time. it´s like the experience of eating and speaking.

Well done! 

I laugh out loud, the writing is what the game shines =)

I really like the art style, music, and some of the funny dialogue in this.

I might have skipped a few lines of dialogue, because I didn't know how to continue the game. And the dinner scene, with the meter on the right, kind of ruined the flow of the game. 

Great job overall!

This was....heartwarming?? Completely unexpected, and the multiple little mini games were an amazing touch.  The letter and response killed me. This game was perfect for this jam.

The only thing is those silly dialog boxes showing dialogue for a split second before slowly typing it out -- very distracting. It would have been a better experience to have the dialogue appear all at once.

that was fun, great story, cool art.

the restaurant scene was unexpected. I almost died

great work :D

That was really unexpected!

But I really liked the story and the overall tone!

This was such a nonsense fiesta... :D I love the visuals and whole story line!

the game crashes a few times which was unfortunate as I love crime games. I think it was just my laptop though. Great visuals but I’m not sure how it was unexpected? Then maybe I needed to play more