I'm impressed by how much you achieved graphically with the different fades and the darkness, good job! It's obvious you care deeply about presentation. Modifying the sprites for the joint running animation was such a sweet little touch 👌

I think for the platforming you might check out adding some more polish to the mechanics by adding coyote jumping. And the whole cutscene being replayed after dying to the flames would be better made skippable, though I do understand that's the level scene you're reloading!

This may also be my favorite credits screen in this jam, I really loved how you went showing the credits in a super chill yet interactive format.

By the way, for sharing your source, most developers use GitHub or another git platform.

Lovely game! Especially for a first Jam. It was short unfortunately, but everything included was very polished: the title screen, the atmosphere of the first level, the light/shadow effect of the second level, etc... The second level was especially well done.

I noticed a little bug: you can let go of your sister just before the transition (the second level still proceeds normally).

I would have loved to see more, I hope you will be doing a post-jam version (it seems you will looking at your replies), so I can check it out. :)

Nice game! I really liked the art style. I also liked how you showed and hid the platforms.

It was a very nice experience! Good combination of music, art and a good use of the theme. Great job!

Really nice art and sound :)

Cool game I like it!

Great job on the graphics and audio, to create this atmosphere. I was really into it, too bad it didn't go further.

The animations, mostly the running with your sister and pushing water onto the fire, were impressive.

One remark is that it's a bit too dark, at least on the characters' location. I played around myself with lights but never managed to find a way to fix that, so I wouldn't be able to help on that. But the characters we a bit difficult to see. Maybe a warm light on them, to show the fire reflecting on them or something? 

Anyway, great work. I hope you'll continue!

The mood is really sad and yet hopeful. I would have liked to see more of this. 

Short but super well made ! I like the presentation overall, pixel art is really good, the music is really well used to convey the emotion, don't want to spoil for anyone who hasn't tried it yet, but that one time, very clever use of lighting.

Just wish the game would have been a bit longer but hey, gamejam deadlines XD

Other than that pretty solid and i liked it quite a bit, well done ^^

Great game! I really like the art

Really nice entry! I like the idea of using fire as a mechanic, everyone instinvitely knows "fire bad" XD

The platforming was pretty decent, not too easy but not too difficult as well, and I think I found someone else who uses darkness as a mechanic too, haha.

The art and music were really good as well, however I was playing with headphones and it seems like you are using AudioStreamPlayer2D for the music? It is positional audio, meaning at times the music was only in one ear. Very simple fix and no big deal.

Overall a really nice entry, good work!

Very nice looking game, love the art and atmosphere. Good job with the lighting, and the music / sfx also fit very nicely with this. My only complaint is that I really wish you had WASD controls in your game, I have to hold the Fn key on my keyboard to use the arrow keys so it's pretty uncomfortable to make those jumps and stuff. But overall good job! nice animations too

I really liked the game. art and music are good.

The start was good, and I wish that all the game was like that, you may add puzzels between the characters. The second level dosn't have a good platforming controllers, they feel not responsive. You can check out the code source of my game, you my find somthing helpful.

I'd like to see the finished game. Good luck!

Wow. It's short but so polished. Rarely you can meet cut scenes in games made for game jam. Perfect job. I enjoyed and war ready to continue playing.

Pixel art is great, well done. Fun to play, even though its short. Like others said, one play of the fire animation is enough. :)

One thing which confused me on the first level was they I think needed to put out the first fire, but then I was just able to run through the second fire? Or maybe I missed something.

Would be interesting to see if you develop this further.

Well done on the submission!

I really liked the pixel art. The controls felt good and responsive, especially when running away from the fire in the dream.

The whole game felt immersive.

A nice, engaging game! Loved the pixel art. Thought the platform part was very clever. It took me a while to get to the top! Great job - well done!

BTW at the beginning, it says to press ctrl to start. Only enter worked! 

Excellent game ! The art is just... wow !

The game is a bit dark though (I couldn't see very well what was happening on screen).

Super well done. Having to re-watch that fire animation over and over got annoying though :)

This was so well done! Art, sound, and movement. It all worked really well together. Even with the game being super short, I actually felt immersed for that short period. Very impressive!