I tried to get a rating in before the deadline, sorry that I was late!
I like this module. It's a good dungeon, very on theme for Appendix N/Elves. It feels otherworldly in a fun way. I could see dropping this into a hex in a forest or putting it on a rumor table for sure. Treasures are excellent, some simple but nice and evocative while the urns in room 11 also present an issue of how to carry them back to safety. Oh and goes with out saying that the alliteration is great.
Great job!
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Saber of the Saffron Elf's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Theme: how well would the module have fit into the Appendix N? | #20 | 4.534 | 4.534 |
| Art: how well does the art support the other content? | #27 | 4.517 | 4.517 |
| Overall | #40 | 4.186 | 4.186 |
| Playability: how easy would it be to run this module? | #55 | 3.845 | 3.845 |
| Writing: how clear and/or interesting is the writing? | #60 | 4.052 | 4.052 |
| Layout: how easy is it to find all the presented information? | #77 | 3.983 | 3.983 |
Ranked from 58 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Comments
Awesome use of public art! Loved the use of alliteration throughout. Nailed the faded, used look.
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The Robes of RostamAbsolutely astounding alliteration at the outset of this adventure! lol
The art choices within whip and the earthy faded-tone really sold that used book feel. I enjoyed how utilitarian the descriptions were as well- no words wasted. Great work!
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In the House of PlutoLooks easy to run! Love the wordplay, holds your attention. Like the look of the pages and great use of public domain artwork.
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Long Staring DandanJam-packed with whacky horticultural horrors. I love the faded magazine/scrapbook vibe here—quite the botanical bonanza where a sneaky Potion of Plant Control would be a big deal. Nice work!
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Scrolls from Azov's ShelfThis freaking rips!
I love the unabashed fun that this adventure site presents. So little background is given, but regardless, as you read the module it sort of builds out a world for you. It is really effective. It's very very modular in the sense that I could throw this, pretty much, into any sandbox campaign.
The pulp theming is definitely there as well. I'd probably have to put in some work to make this run at my table, however, I do understand that this is written for OD&D, a game I don't have the pleasure of running on a weekly basis, and one that really is built for these styles of adventures.
I really enjoyed reading this! It sparked my imagination and made me want to go run OD&D
Cheers!
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The Zircon ZephyrSome very fun encounters. I loved how you tried to sneak Crocus-diles and orc-hids by us. Great puns. I may very well steal the toolmaking totem for my home game. Overall, a great entry.
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Morrion's Mind StoneIs that an A6 format? Crazy how much gameplay (and art!) you managed to get onto those pages. The map at the end since it tightly ties the whole thing together in an excellent way.
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the Hoard of the Sin-EaterI admire the commitment to alliteration needed to write this adventure. It’s silly, scary, and whimsical in both the modern and the “horrible fae” sense all at once. I’m a fan.
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The Astral ShipSomehow I commented on the wrong post for the adventure I just read lol
Now about THIS adventure for real:
I love the DIY vibe of this Zine, it captures the DIY artistic side of zines that makes them so fun! Great art, maps and layout!
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The War Below the WavesThis is a brilliant piece of weird fantasy that perfectly captures the Appendix N spirit. The writing is top-notch; the alliterative introduction is fantastic, and the descriptions throughout are evocative. The creativity of the unique encounters makes them inspired and memorable.
The final encounter with Suvitas and the sentient sword, Glitter-Gleam, is a real highlight. The dynamic of them speaking independently and complaining about each other, while the sword forces the elf to attack, creates a great, playable situation that goes far beyond a simple boss fight.
The entire adventure is also presented beautifully. The layout is clean, the map is easy to read, and the art choices enhance the strange, mystical feel of the garden. Amazing work—I cannot wait to run this for my group and hope to see more from you in the future.
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He Who Walks with ShadowsThis garden glistens with fabulous flavour. The art, text and layout come together to ooze old-school. I love the A6 format.
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Keep of the Thrice-Crowned KingReally cool setting and lore for this adventure! I really like the cohesive feel of the artwork paired with the different plant monsters. It's giving unsettling forest vibes, well done!
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Rogues Blood at TwilightI love the use of public domain images! Very Appendix N! The font choice and the layout are thematic! I really like all the strange creatures that can be encountered!
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The Knight ErrantI appreciate this adventure's aptitude with alliteration. Nice design and really well-chosen public domain art. Lots of great roleplay opportunities in this locale. And that cursed sword is nasty!
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