Really interesting and original plot.  Descriptions are terse, clear and thematic.  Art style fit's well.  

Level of detail is too sparese for such a big adventure for my taste Since it was written for the appendix N jam).  Would love to see it fleshed out more.  

Had the pleasure of playing with one of the creators in a campaign run by the other creator, so I knew this would be nothing short of excellent! The art style and overall concept really excite me to want to know more and play this! :)

good