itch.io

Thanks for starting the jam! It was super fun to be a part of!

Love it! Can’t wait to show this to my players!

BEAUTIFUL! Thank you for making these :)

Awesome condensed toolkit! I love that there’s a question for the delver to answer, it feels like a psychological walkthrough test for the character!

I love your art, but most of all your writing style! It’s funny and but really describes the space and vibes at the same time. I laughted at: “Crossing on the Midnight is somehow the least unsafe option.”

Also Deuteronomy Brigs is my new favorite name.

Great! I love the setup and twist with the sorceress, cool timer and dragon procedure too. Well stocked with fun items and fun interactions, the Gwiberkin hiding something in a pot was one I enjoyed.

I really love your art and the map as well. I was halfway through reading the dungeon before I realized it was even a flowchart style map, it has such an artistic bend to it.

Great! I love the setup and twist with the sorceress, cool timer and dragon procedure too. Well stocked with fun items and fun interactions, the Gwiberkin hiding something in a pot was one I enjoyed.

I really love your art and the map as well. I was halfway through reading the dungeon before I realized it was even a flowchart style map, it has such an artistic bend to it. Although I was little confused why the secret passage in the room 2 key isn’t on the map like 3 other secret passages.

Your Reddit art posts always catch my attention too!

Amazing dungeon! Such a smart use of space too, I love that the cover doubles as a beautiful map, the art for each of the animals is very emotive too. Such a fun adventure with a lot of fun personalities inside. My favorite encounters were the Cranes / Ox, the Dragon, and Horse haha. Great stuff!

Amazing dungeon! Such a smart use of space too, I love that the cover doubles as a beautiful map, the art for each of the animals is very emotive too. Such a fun adventure with a lot of fun personalities inside. My favorite encounters were the Cranes / Ox, the Dragon, and Horse haha. Great stuff!

Love this adventure! I’m about to start running Cursed Scroll #3 from Shadowdark, this will fit in perfectly to the setting!

Love this adventure! I’m about to start running Cursed Scroll #3 from Shadowdark, this will fit in perfectly to the setting!

I like the way you keyed the map, makes sense to reuse areas that are going to appear more that once. I like that you gave those rooms a little procedure. Nice work!

Loved your entry! The writing is easy to follow and imaginative. This is a really unique point crawl, it almost feels like a set piece in Skyrim! Of course it can go so many ways and with all the fun magical items I think Players would have a great time here! It might even make for a perfect campaign starter.

Somehow I commented on the wrong post for the adventure I just read lol

Now about THIS adventure for real:

I love the DIY vibe of this Zine, it captures the DIY artistic side of zines that makes them so fun! Great art, maps and layout!

That’s amazing! Great review and great adventure!

Oh really? Forged in the Dark is a story games adjacent system. It’s used for Blades in the Dark and a bunch of other games. But it has a mechanic really similar to the ‘I Planned for this’ section. Blades in the Dark specifically is all about heists

You packed so much cool stuff in here so neatly! I love the blending of some FitD elements in here too. Very nice!

Great vibes and great adventure! It feels very Appx N, but I could also see if fitting in with a Mothership style game too. Awesome job! The map is fantastic! I really like that it’s in a nice blue ink as well. Lots of great choices and design throughout!

You really nailed matching your title to the narrative. The cover is so  good, and I like that you fit the map there too. It has good spooky vibes with lots of fun details. I especially liked the way the Shadows in room 2 mock players who find themselves alone haha

Super cool to see you blending RPG's with more Board Game style puzzle dungeons! I would love to see a mega dungeon that's full of player handouts and puzzles all throughout!

Great cover and map! I love your prose, it feels very appendix N in presentation and theme. My favorite detail in the dungeon is finding Gan's severed arm, really cool piece of environmental story-telling! The sweeping narrative is really imaginative and fun, and make space feel VERY fantasy.

Thanks for sharing! I’ve only read a bit of the Dying Earth books, it was immediately clear to see its influence on DnD, especially Spell Slots haha

I can’t thank you enough for your kind words! I would love to hear more feedback if you do get a chance to run it. Critical / well-thought out feedback is so valuable in this hobby, so thanks again!

Feels like a fantasy episode of the Twilight Zone! Very Appx. N, I love that you even included your own inspirations. And the cover art is  soooo good!

Feels like a fantasy episode of the Twilight Zone! Very Appx. N, I love that you even included your own inspirations. And the cover art is  soooo good!

Very well written and laid out! I especially like the catch of playing the bone harp haha

Great idea that's executed pretty perfectly. It feels like a Doctor Who episode in the best way! I also love the Fossil that can consume your future, I love when the thing happening is reflected so cleanly by a mechanic.

Great idea that's executed pretty perfectly. It feels like a Doctor Who episode in the best way! I also love the Fossil that can consume your future, I love when the thing happening is reflected so cleanly by a mechanic. Great job!

Awesome adventure! I really like the dreamhaze as something the PC's have to think about the entire adventure, don't run too fast or get in a fight, or they'll have to contend with it!

Awesome entry! I really like the dreamhaze as something the PC's have to think about the entire adventure, don't run too fast or get in a fight, or they'll have to contend with it!

The presentation of this adventure is off the charts! My favorite bit was the Valet Shoes haha, what a cool magic item!

The art for this adventure is one of my favorite I've seen so far! Fun idea and beautifully executed!

I agree with all the positives in the comments, if I was asked to provide any critical feedback, it would be that the font is too small to read in some places. Of course this is a 4 page dungeon and I know space is tough, but that's literally all the feedback I could think to provide haha. Great job!

Nice toolkit approach to a small dungeon! Vanoc is such a cool character, I love his portrait, and I love the idea of travelling through the tower and having this guy antagonize you throughout.

Nice toolkit approach to a small dungeon! Vanoc is such a cool character, I love his portrait, and I love the idea of travelling through the tower and having this guy antagonize you throughout.

This brought me a lot of joy haha. I really like the light hearted tone, yeti tourism and the newspaper page as a handout is just awesome. Great art and maps too!

This brought me a lot of joy haha. I really like the light hearted tone, yeti tourism and the newspaper page as a handout is just awesome. Great art and maps too!

I love your cover, and this has lots of fun details! I especially liked the Pyschic Storm; the way falling in room 3 actually reveals a treasure, cool way to hide a secret; giving the players a map near the end of the cave! I think the map or even part of it is a great reward we don't see enough of.

I love your cover, and this has lots of fun details! I especially liked the Pyschic Storm; the way falling in room 3 actually reveals a treasure, cool way to hide a secret; giving the players a map near the end of the cave! I think the map or even part of it is a great reward we don't see enough of.

I love the high concept for this adventure and your art! I wonder how everyone knows that the Witch is the cause right away? It might make it more engaging for the players if that part is a mystery to uncover?