I'm a sucker for having multiple competing factions in my games that players can influence, and I think this delivers on that with elegance and enough room to get really inspired for subplots.

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Seeing the white dots after each objective, it would be really cool to use them as fill boxes and add a one-liner consequence if they are all filled. 

Like each time Les Enfants Terribles manage to "Gather More Members" fill a box. On three filled: 

[Organized Resistance] - Faction members secured a contraband line, and there are now weapons onboard Minerva-II !

A module describing a strange colony ship docking with Prospero’s Dream, and how its society interfaces with the Dream as they make ready to move on. It provides a really nice setup for faction play, as the ship’s AI, the Dream’s corporations, and hidden rebels on board all vie for control.

Each goal is presented with a tracker, and I would have loved some guidance and suggestions on how to fill these, either through PC action, or just the passage of time, as the factions each work towards their goals.

The layout and presentation are great, with a lovely retro pixel-art style.

The arrival of Minerva-II to Prospero's Dream provides a dangerous and unique new  location to explore as well as a disruptive event to build a campaign around. I see the clone population as recently docking on The Dream and being on the verge of leaving their ship at any moment. It is a little hard to believe this revolution took hundreds of years to develop, for my purposes I may rework the timeline a little.  A very cool addition to the setting!

This is such a stellar piece of work! I love faction play and this is just writhe with so much personality.

I do have a couple of questions/nitpicks that I wish I noticed when I first read the module during the jam development.

1) A J-9 drive is crazy! Shipbreaker's toolkit lists J-4 as "experimental technology" so J-9 is almos inconceivable. Is this intended? 

2) The timeline is so long that it's hard for me to rationalize why it took 2000 years to start building a second J-9. Is the implication that space is so vast, that's just what it took coasting on thrusters/drifting through space?

3) This seems to only be an issue in print (not on PDF as much) but the purple text on black background is very hard to read.

I would totally insert this into a Prospero's Dream sandbox. It's got Campaign material written all over it!

First, I love the design and the layout! They’re going really well with the content and the whole clones/AI situations. The actual story and factions are quite fun to integrate in a bigger campaign as a subplot and I know exactly where I would put them in one of my table.

"Hey, did you hear - that ship full of crazy clones docked with the Dream yesterday?"

Incredibly impressed with how much fits into a small space here and how ready-to-run it feels. 

The pixelated 80s style art takes me right back to my youth and is very evocative! The choice of purple text on black makes it hard for my eyes to read though - I need more contrast! But that could just be my sad old eyes. The writing is clear and to the point, with a few typos - "He strives" is repeated under heading 4 years ago in the timeline. It isn't at all clear to me why the clones don't just leave the ship once it has docked with the Dream! I'm just not sold on this module being fun for my gaming group. I can't really see a strong horror element, nor is there much of a mystery. There are two sides on the Minerva engaged in a phoney war, and the players are supposed to align with one or the other (or at least will come under pressure to), but why should they care?  It is hard to see what would motivate the players to get involved. I think some further thought on player motivation could make this more engaging for wardens as an adventure background.