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A jam submission

The Plot Hole : Little RedView game page

A retelling of the classical: Little red riding hood, where the player shapes the narrative of the story.
Submitted by LaCrearthur (@LaCreArthur), Handy Corpse, El Fideo Rubio ( Héctor ) (@El_fideo_rubio), validbit — 52 minutes, 2 seconds before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Innovation#34.4054.405
Audio#74.0004.000
Overall#114.0064.006
Theme#134.1654.165
Game Design#623.7973.797
Graphics#634.0134.013
Fun#743.6583.658

Ranked from 79 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Submitted(+2)

Really funny game. Super concept! Well done on the narration too.

Submitted(+2)

I really liked the idea of storytelling and game mechanics. But I couldn’t pass the fallen tree. The black hole didn’t respond even after holding for 10 seconds.

Developer

Sorry for your buggy experience. If you'd like to give it another shot, releasing the mouse button for a moment, and re-activating the plot hole can get it to act properly again. Thank you so much for checking us out!!! 

Developer(+1)

We have made a page with a fixed version if you were not able to enjoy it : https://lacrearthur.itch.io/plot-hole-fixed

Submitted(+2)

I seriously love your take on the jam's theme! This whole project seems so clever. The bugs did in the way of my playthrough as well, but I would love to see it once its updated!

Developer(+1)

Thank you so much for checking us out. The bugs are sad, but we are working on a fixed version for after the jam.  Cheers!!!

Developer(+1)

We have made a page with a fixed version if you were not able to enjoy it : https://lacrearthur.itch.io/plot-hole-fixed

Submitted

I'm glad you were able to fix those bugs! Fantastic voice acting and great execution all around!

Submitted(+2)

Would have played to the end. Voice work was on point, some parts could been paced better.

Submitted(+1)

Wow, this is an incredibly ambitious project. The bugs make me sad because I really wanted to keep moving forward! I could see this game going in millions of cool directions and it's an incredible idea with already super polished art concepts and story. You did a really good job, if only you had just a LITTLE more time!!!

Developer

We totally agree! We wish we had a little more time to work on bugs in the browser. Expect to see a more polished version after the game jam finishes! Thanks so much for playing and for your feedback!

Submitted(+2)

Unfortunately, the voice stopped going. I pressed N but it didn't help. The voice got to the part about the black spot, then stopped.

Developer

We have made a page with a fixed version if you were not able to enjoy it : https://lacrearthur.itch.io/plot-hole-fixed

Submitted(+2)

Very fun and solid game! 

Submitted(+2)

Solid work! I think I did the ending too quickly since multiple voices lines were going on at once? Either way it worked well and the black hole effect was not only unexpected, but it looked cool too! 

Submitted (2 edits) (+2)

Nice and amusing narrative. Very innovative in my opinion. Experienced some bugs, but it was sorted out by reading the description. Got the good ending :)

Submitted(+2)

Excellent game, i laughted a lot, nice voice acting. Unfortunately i could not get to the end because of  a few bugs, but however a greate game. 

Submitted(+2)

Really nice and unique, well done !

Submitted(+2)

Superb! I was engaged the whole time, super interesting take on the 'holes' theme. Great Job! :)

Submitted(+2)

Brilliant work, Erren! Can't stop laughing :D

Submitted(+2)

This game made me laugh several times. I really  hope that you upload a patched version after the jam because this game deserves to be seen it its full glory. 

Developer

Yes we will :) it's so infuriating to have bugs in the web player at the last moment when it was working on the editor ahaha

Submitted(+3)

Absolutely loved it, the story side of it was awesome and the narration was very high quality. The art style fits the game perfecntly.

Submitted(+3)

Hey, this is ntwiles from the discord channel!

This is such a cool idea. Had a lot of fun playing through the story. I think I broke it while inside the grandmother’s house accidentally but right clicking; it froze and the audio stopped, but I believe I was right at the end anyway.

Speaking of audio, serious kudos for getting such great voice acting into the game in such a short time. Thank you for sharing!

Submitted(+2)

Such a nice game! Your game represents for me what I'm looking for when I participate to a gamejam: innovative, fits the theme, good atmosphere and good graphics. The voice acting was great also :) Well done!

Submitted(+2)

I love this version of the tale. It was difficult to find the right positions, but I finally managed to get through the game.
Nice Work!

Submitted(+3)

Very well made, I played through the "hole" thing :p

Developer(+1)

yezzz

Submitted(+2)

Dig it :)

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