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A jam submission

The Pencil GameView game page

Submitted by ChrispyKreme — 10 hours, 55 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
INNOVATION#933.7113.711
OVERALL#3523.2673.267
DESIGN#3943.0673.067
MUSIC#4042.8002.800
VISUALS#4543.1333.133
SOUNDS#4712.6002.600
THEME#5422.7112.711

Ranked from 45 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Submitted

I enjoyed that I could path my own route and take challenges on in my own way.  It was a bit difficult but I got better and used less lead as I kept playing. In terms of feedback, I agree wholeheartedly with Rykuzu Studios' comment below.

Great job! Keep up the good work!

Submitted

Awesome game! I love the ability to directly affect the game and build what I want! Great job!

This reminds me of a dr who (maybe?) game I used to play on the school computers but yeah it's a cool game. Could do with a bit of polishing and a restart button but overall it's fun

Submitted

Great concept! Restart button would be beneficial for the game or like some sort of undo drawing ability. Adding more polish will make the game more user friendly. Do not get me wrong, the game is not hard to play, but to avoid confusion and trapping myself while trying to block bullets would be a bit annoying. This game has great potential.

Submitted

Concept is great! i like it

Submitted

Very cool and congrats on making this game with the amount of time you had. The concept is very cool and the fact that you got it working is very impressive. II also liked I could erase because I did end up making a mistake and locking myself up in a box. lol 

Submitted

Impressive effort!!  I spammed the pencil to make instant platforms beneath me. Sure sped things up until my lead ended. Oh well. Nice game!!

Submitted

This was awesome! I was super confused at first until I realized I could draw ramps. I never used the block button, I just used the pencil to draw a shield

Submitted

For your first game jam, this sure was really creative and interesting! The graphics looked really nice and the controls and music was really good. A few things I would suggest though is to further explain the objectives of the game. I was throwing into the game not knowing fully what to do and although the arrows were a nice touch on where to go, I didn't know what to specifically do.

Also, I would suggest adding a restart button so players can restart the level if they mess up, which chances are, we might on our first try.

Lastly, the game does need polishing in a couple places such as feedback from enemy attacks and regaining our drawing in some way or an explanation on how to recover our drawing skills.

Other than that, amazing game entry and nice work on it!

Submitted

Great idea. I experienced some bad menu scaling at start but after start game everything was fine. Keep it up!

Submitted

Well done!

Submitted

Cool concept. I don't know how the theme fits on this by the way.

But if you polish this game, it will be great. It has good potential.

Submitted

Really cool idea and very good execution! Blocking bullets by drawing lines is a nice touch as well.

Submitted

This game is awesome! The idea is brilliant and everything feel so polished. I had a blast playing this. Fantastic job!

Submitted

cool game i like the idea of drawing  lines

Submitted

I've commented your game in this stream from 1:30:00 to 1:45:00

Submitted

Not bad at all! Really good concept for the theme!

Submitted

It's really fun, the mechanic is just really cool to interact with. I like that you can erase and block bullets too :D

Submitted

Really neat game idea,  Amazing job for your first game jam!

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