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A jam submission

MAKE SPACEView game page

Take Less Time to Create More Space
Submitted by MaddyGamedev — 19 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
MUSIC#3023.1253.125
THEME#3803.0633.063
SOUNDS#4242.7192.719
INNOVATION#5222.6562.656
OVERALL#5552.8132.813
VISUALS#6382.5942.594
DESIGN#6572.4382.438

Ranked from 32 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Developer

Hello guys, the patch is uploaded. Please let me know your feedback.

Submitted

It's sad that there was that bug, but it was still quite fun! I liked the music and the concept is really cool! The only bad thing I'd have to say is that I don't really like the font. But I'd love to play this if you'd patched out the bug!

Developer(+1)

Thank you. I will patch it up just after voting ends. I will be very happy if you would play after that.

Submitted

Ohhhh!!! The game looks so good and I just wanted to play more! It's such a shame that I couldn't due to that bug. That was some amazing pixel art! Dude I wanted to jump on that enemy but the lava (T_T). I can see the potential. If not due to that bug, you would have submitted such a great game. Amazing!

Please take some time to play and rate my game as well, I would really appreciate it! Thanks!!

Developer

Thank you

Submitted

Try to post the not buggy version once the game jam ends. I would like to see what you were going for.

Developer(+1)

Sure. It will be up as soon as the voting ends...

Submitted

I'm looking forward to seeing the patch, I got stuck on level two as well. 

Developer

sure...just after the voting ends.

Submitted

I too got stuck in second level. I will play try it again once the ratings are over as you suggested, I'm curios about the rest

Developer

Thanks buddy

Submitted

The shooting feels nice, but as other people have said in the comments, I couldn't get past level 2. That's alright, though. The game still has potential :)

Developer

Thanks for your feedback.

Developer(+1)

Hello, 

You have played my game and gave me feedback, I would request you to play my game once more after the voting period is over. I have fixed the issue but could't upload.

I really want you all to see the boss and the  3rd level...both are very much interesting.

And then let me know in short how it was.

Submitted

No problem friend :) 

It'll be great if you also try and give feedback to my game, thanks!

Submitted

Hey bud i tried  your game and couldnt get past level two but after looking at the comments it seems you werent aware of that bug until afterwards but hey, it happens! I have a sorta game breaking bug in my game as well where you can only make it to  level 3 and not up to 5 :( please dont take offense i just  want to be constructive for your next game. I felt like the theme was a bit lacking. I just feel like there wasnt too much creativity in the theme aspect. One thing that felt off to me was the control scheme. It wouldve felt much better to have the jump button bound to the W or Up arrow key since those buttons were not used for anything else. I really like the music though. Very well done!

Developer(+1)

The second level was a very silly mistake.

Thanks for your feedback.Will keep all that in mind next time.

Submitted

Of course. Hope you have time to try out mine :)

Developer

sure will try when i wake up.

Developer

Hello, 

You have played my game and gave me feedback, I would request you to play my game once more after the voting period is over. I have fixed the issue but could't upload.

I really want you all to see the boss and the  3rd level...both are very much interesting.

And then let me know in short how it was.

Submitted

the effects are amazing and its a good game but it has bugs that i cant even go in the next level. It would be amazing if you fix those bugs hehe. 

Developer

Yeah, the next level stuff is my silly mistake. Anyways thanks for your feedback .

Developer

Hello, 

You have played my game and gave me feedback, I would request you to play my game once more after the voting period is over. I have fixed the issue but could't upload.

I really want you all to see the boss and the  3rd level...both are very much interesting.

And then let me know in short how it was.

Submitted

I think this game has potential, but there were a few bugs that could be ironed out for a better player experience. I have an ultrawide monitor, and the UI over-scaled to the point that I couldn't click the Quit button. The controls were a little floaty for my tastes, which caused more than a couple accidental slides into lava. Regardless, congrats on finishing and publishing the game! 

Developer

Thank you for your feedback buddy.

Submitted

It sounded like a good idea, but I couldnt get past the one that was spawning in the lava. It kept dying(?) but then just respawning like nothing happened. The graphics was decent and the premise of having more time to beat the boss sounded good

Developer

Thank you for your feedback. The blob enemy was not dying. It was supposed to change its position in certain spawn points. As player has to go close to the blob to jump on it and kill it and the blob should have been continuously moving.

But I made a mistake and gave a different spawn point rather than the blob spawn point and hence the baaaaaaaad bug.

This taught me a lesson to "ALWAYS PLAYTEST".

Submitted

Ahhh I understand. Well this happens for everyones first game jam. Next time you will look out for that and fix it :)

Developer

Sure, Thank you.

Developer

Hello, 

You have played my game and gave me feedback, I would request you to play my game once more after the voting period is over. I have fixed the issue but could't upload.

I really want you all to see the boss and the  3rd level...both are very much interesting.

And then let me know in short how it was.

Submitted

Very good first game jam game! There were a few bugs, and the character moved quite quickly,  but otherwise it was a good effort. I'd appreciate if you could rate mine!

https://itch.io/jam/blackthornprod-game-jam-3/rate/899354

Dyzmorphia - a fast paced shooter where you sacrifice life for ammo!

Developer

Thank you for your feedback. Will surely rate yours

Submitted

I like this game! Great art and gameplay! Good job!

Please check my game as well ;)

Developer

Thank you.Will check your game as well

Submitted

It's okay I guess. The character is moving too quickly and enemies are very easy to kill. Also I can't beat the second level. Always remember to playtest to make sure that everything is fine!

Developer

Thank you for your feedback. I learned this lesson to keep some time in the jams for the playtest.

Developer

Hello, 

You have played my game and gave me feedback, I would request you to play my game once more after the voting period is over. I have fixed the issue but could't upload.

I really want you all to see the boss and the  3rd level...both are very much interesting.

And then let me know in short how it was.

Submitted

I think its great that you made a game! And the concept is nice. However i encountered a bug where monsters would not die and just respawn over and over. Keep jamming and learning !:)

Developer

Thanks for the feedback and the bugs are my bad....i am a noob here..xD

Developer

Hello, 

You have played my game and gave me feedback, I would request you to play my game once more after the voting period is over. I have fixed the issue but could't upload.

I really want you all to see the boss and the  3rd level...both are very much interesting.

And then let me know in short how it was.

Submitted

Nice game! I liked the concept and most of the art looks nice!

Developer

Thank you

Submitted

i cant beat the second stage or maybe i can i dont know 

it would loss its health or shield ten it would become dizzy and spawn again..but overall it was ok. i however think the art and music are great...cough....better than mine anyway...

Developer

Yes, second stage is my bad. Anyways Thank you for feedback.

Developer

Hello, 

You have played my game and gave me feedback, I would request you to play my game once more after the voting period is over. I have fixed the issue but could't upload.

I really want you all to see the boss and the  3rd level...both are very much interesting.

And then let me know in short how it was.

Submitted

I had fun wihle playing . The concept is original gotta say that.My only problem is the controls. Player moves and jumps too fast sometimes i couldn't jump where i wanted and jumped into lava :D . Other than that great work i liked it :)

Developer

Thank you for your feedback

Submitted

I liked it ! And well done for a first game jam !
Font was a bit hard to read, and the feedback on some enemies could have been improved, but still, a good job for a first one !

Developer

Thank you

Submitted

congratulations for finishing your first jam!!! 

i would say some things so you can improve your next game : 

* the explosion and enemies animation are well done

* the UI is not, i mean, it's functional but it doesn't look good, my advice is this:

choose ONLY ONE typography for all the menu, and design your color palette for the menu, not based on  the color of your level, but instead based on the feeling/theme/atmosphere that you try to communicate with your game. and choose a typography that reinforces that theme. same wiht the buttons, and the rest of the menu elements.

* i can't pass the second enemy because its always on the lava, so , my advice with this is check your enemy AI behavior, or make sure that they spawn/ roam between an area determined by 2 Vector2 variables, that way you ensure that your enemies will stay where you want them to.

* the healt bars :  if you are going to use a slider as a health bar, remove the ball thingy that comes with the gameObject, otherwise, you could use a panel, and change it's fill value variable via code. (check internet for tutorials) is a much better way to do health bars, and also supports images , so you can add custom health bars designed by you.

*the player jumps way too high and move sideways like sliding, try to improve that by using a rigidbody to move the character, (using transform.translate or transform.positon will clip your character if he moves fast enough).

again congrats for making it to the end , and keep coding!!!

Developer

Thank you for such a detailed feedback and pointing the flaws.I will surely keep that in mind. 

Submitted

you are welcome, i would not call them flaws, just things you can improve upon... it is hard in the beginning , but with some time and a lot of google one can improve a lot ahaha

Developer(+1)

and I will get better..Thank you

Developer

Hello, 

You have played my game and gave me feedback, I would request you to play my game once more after the voting period is over. I have fixed the issue but could't upload.

I really want you all to see the boss and the  3rd level...both are very much interesting.

And then let me know in short how it was.

Submitted

I really like the creativity and the way you implemented the theme. The art is awesome too. Rated 5 stars.

If you have a second check out my submission too.

Developer

Thank you for your feedback.Will check you game as well..

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