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A jam submission

Shine BrighterView game page

Submitted by SRWGShinyo (@Shinyo17478072) — 2 days, 4 hours before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
MUSIC#1473.5483.548
OVERALL#1513.7103.710
DESIGN#1543.5483.548
VISUALS#2283.7423.742
SOUNDS#3133.0323.032
THEME#3433.1613.161
INNOVATION#3623.0003.000

Ranked from 31 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

Submitted (2 edits)

i love the story and art awesome job
ps:the sfx are awesome

Submitted

Nice game! 

Submitted

Well done!!

Submitted(+1)

Nice game !

Submitted(+1)

nice game. cute project. rate mine Rate cubic sword game by EM for Blackthornprod GAME JAM #3 - itch.io

Submitted(+1)

Hey! I really like the graphics in this game, everything goes so well together! 

Would appreciate if you can check out my game too!:D

Submitted(+1)

Great puzzle game with a nice message attached! I enjoyed the puzzles, everything made sense and I had a good time playing it!

If you wanted to improve, I suggest making it so you don't have to re-click move when ever you want to change screens, it wasn't a huge problem but could have helped streamline things alot.

Overall, excellent game! Check out my game if you get a chance!

Developer

Hi there !
Thanks for that review :D Yeah I get your point on the movements, I really wanted it to feel like an old PNClick aha !
Thanks a lot !

Submitted(+1)

Very nice game, you did a great job on the visuals and sound design.

Everything is very cohesive :)

Developer

Thank you for playing !

Submitted(+1)

Truly astonishing game, mate. I'm impressed. It really screams of polish and good design. Not much to say about it, other than perhaps, that some of the models - the Essence Machine - could have used an actual texture.

Keep up the good work!

Developer

Wow that's a very very nice review <3 Thank you so much !

Submitted(+1)

Cute! The stars are really awesome. I think it would be great if you variate a bit in the things you have to achieve but its really cool!

Developer

Thank you for playing ! :D

Submitted(+1)

Nice game, liked it :) 

First I got lost in the labyrinth, it took some time til I realized what happening there. 

Developer

Thanks a lot !
Aha yeah I tried you know to use some codes to make it easier to understand but I guess it didn't hit the marj !

Submitted (1 edit) (+1)

It's a great game. At first I played by adding the essences to the stars, then I played because I want to see the other ending so It was a great leson about life(I think :) ).

Liked the music, the control is little wierd but it fits for the game(it is like a point and click adventure). When you use the fish rod and don't click on another button just the pool you can catch much more fish. And with the big star first it needs "four" essence then Starry mentions "Five".

Overal it is a good game.

Developer

Thanks a lot for that review and the bug spotting ! Thanks for playing !

Submitted(+1)

I loved the story! It's so cute and wholesome! The art, dialogue, and puzzles are great too. I did get a bug where Bluey both existed as the non-shiny version in their original screen and as the shiny version on the group screen. Maybe just have the move arrows on the screen rather than having to click on the move button than the arrow, they could be faded and brighten when you hover over them if you want to keep them hidden. Really great work! 

Developer(+1)

Thank you so much for playing !
Yeah, I get you on the arrow thing...I wanted it to have a very 'old pnclick' mood y'know ! Thanks a lot !

Submitted(+1)

I really like this! The story is really happy and friendly, and the puzzles are fun to do.

Developer

Thanks !!

Submitted(+1)

The concept is so good! the art is Amazing! i would like to play this on my mobile device!

Developer

Hey thank so much :D
I might release it on mobile, why not !

Submitted

Pretty cool, I couldnt finish it, didnt find where to use to code for. 

I wish the interactions would have been easier, clicking each button just to chose a different action wasnt all so fun, it was alot of work just to move or interact.

Submitted

The code is for the chest, press pickup on it

Submitted

Oh well, I tired to "Use" the chest, Didnt work out for me..

Developer

Yeah, knowing the code allows to open the chest, by 'pick uping' it ;)
I understand your criticism though ! I really wanted it to feel like an old PNClick <3
Thanks for playing and for your review !

Submitted(+1)

I had a lot of fun interacting with everything. The interactions were funny and cute. The story and concept was something new for me and the art was very nice to look at. I also love how polished and interactive it is. It made the game stand out. Loved it!

Developer

Thank you for that nice review !

Submitted(+1)

Really cool game 

Submitted(+1)

Wow really cool game. I've never played a point and click adventure before but I loved the ending and it fit the theme really really nicely. It must've been a lot of work to come up with all those text responses. Nice job.

Developer

Thank you so much for these kind words !

Submitted(+1)

a very chill and minimalist point and click adventure, the only thing that i didn't like is that i wasn't able to talk with the telescope :(

Developer(+1)

Ahah sorry for that, I swear I'll update it at some point with a line !
Thank you for playing !

Submitted

i was joking , but that would be a cool and weird addition to the game