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A jam submission

Planet VisitView game page

Game about collecting, crafting, trading and travel.
Submitted by Tonyl — 5 hours, 35 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Jam Theme#44.2924.292
Crafting Mechanics#64.0004.000
Overall#163.5923.592
Audio#213.3753.375
Gameplay (Fun Factor)#223.4583.458
Graphics#612.8332.833

Ranked from 24 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Which theme was used for the game, and in what way?
Both themes: There are *alien* merchants. Your given time on each planet *expires*.

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Submitted(+1)

This was fun! Resource and time management while trying to sell to aliens with ever increasing needs. One run had me fail because I thought I had all the ingredients, but I was one short and left before I could recover them all (XP). I did like how extra fuel turned into flowers at the end, and the ability to change the difficulty was a nice touch. I did successfully beaten it on normal if you were wondering. Phenomenal work!

Developer

Thanks for the feedback! Glad you liked it and beat it :D.

Submitted(+1)

That was quite fun. Liked the crafting mechanic and the time constraint. Although it sometimes got a little stressful.

Developer

Thanks for the feedback! I will remember to add some breaks between the action next time :).

Submitted(+1)

I liked the panicked race to craft the materials to trade, more use for stars and maybe slightly easier traders (at least a bit later in the game). Excellent job

Developer

Thank you :)!

Submitted(+1)

Pure cratfing, but somehow I really enjoyed this one. I think the green ingredient is too rare though.

Developer

Thanks for playing :)! I tried so hard to balance the two items! Glad you had fun though :)!

Submitted(+1)

I really liked this one. Super engaging the whole way through, really well paced, ramped up in difficulty at the perfect rate.

My one issue would be that there is no down time. It might be nice for example to be able to choose when you're ready to go down to the next planet. But the current way does maintain the frantic pace the whole time.

Seriously, I had a great time with this game. Great job!

Developer

I'm very glad you liked it! And thanks for the feedback :)!

Submitted(+1)

Interesting crafting system, but the game could use a tutorial. Also, I liked your scene transition effect.

Developer

Thanks :)! I was thinking about adding a tutorial but ended up choosing to rely on other means (icons, glow, ...). But you are right, maybe it would have been a better idea to just use a standard tutorial. Was there anything in particular that you found hard to understand?

Submitted (2 edits) (+1)

I lost my first 2 tries because I didn't realize the pentagon was fuel and also I didn't realize you had to trade your supplies with the alien by dragging your items into the trade box. Maybe put a title "Trade" over that box?

Also, with the pentagon, you could add a spout to make it look like a gasoline container to get the idea across. I don't think you need a long tutorial, but something like an overlay that labels the main elements and basic instructions before stage 1 begins.

Developer

Thanks for the suggestions! I'm glad you understood everything in the end :)!

Submitted(+1)

I liked the game, it has an interesting proposal!

I didn't manage to craft a star, I don't know what was needed to make a square, but that's okay.
The music and sounds are very pleasant

Developer(+1)

Thanks :)! The squares appear naturally on most planets in the form of water. Did you manage to visit other planets? Or is there something that wasn't clear?

Submitted(+1)

Ohhh the water was the square form !! lol I didn't associated... ok that make sense, sorry

Submitted(+1)

I thought this was pretty cool! The crafting mechanic seemed really nice, but I think it could have benefited from a tutorial! Excellent work!

Feel free to check out our game, Zixels 2.

Developer

Thanks :)! I tried to communicate the rules differently, but a standard tutorial might have been a better choice. It has definitely got its pros and cons. Glad you liked the game :)! Of course I will check out yours ;).

Submitted(+1)

I wasn't expecting this to be so fun! The shape crafting system was simple but created a lot of depth. However some parts were kinda glitchy. Well done!

Developer

Glad you liked it, thank you :)! Could you please specify what was glitchy?

Submitted(+1)

Sure! Sometimes it would show me ingredients I needed but other shapes worked. It also would give me things that I didn't craft. It didn't happen very often though.

Developer

Woah, that sounds bad! Never encountered that in the testing. Huh. Sorry if I missed a bug :/.

Submitted(+1)

Nah it was fine.

Submitted(+1)

I really really enjoyed this. What a surprising amount of depth and strategy. I started out trying to craft as I went and then tried hoarding shapes and crafting during the flight but couldn't drag fuel through all the shapes I had stockpiled! Good times!

Developer

Haha :D. That feeling of crazy scenerios with the inventory is something I was really hoping to create :). Thanks for the comment!

Submitted(+1)

A fun game, which appears simple at first, but reveals itself to be quite the challenge! The crafting desk and the dragging and dropping reminded me a lot of Papers Please.
I thought the visual language used was very clear and instructive -  the only thing that wasn't clear to me at first( and which caused my first game over :S )was that you had to keep clicking the triangle to get a triangle piece to appear. Perhaps that stands out as it's active, and the square and the cirlce are passive.
The music and sound effects were great too!
Really liked the particle effects for the square, and the fact that you couldn't keep it! That was a super interesting way to test the the player. Although the situation where the planet you arrive at doesn't have any squares, but you need them to craft whatever the alien wants, emphasises the issue I found with the game: sometimes you can't do anything. Whilst in those sitations I found myself just stocking up on shapes - which feels like it should never replace the main objective of crafting for the alien. It also means that when you've got no fuel, and can't craft for the alien, you've essentially already lost the game but have to wait for it (unless there's something I'm missing!)
But overall there's a very promising premise here, and with a few tweaks I think it would be awesome!

Developer(+1)

Thanks so much for all the great feedback :)! You're not missing anything and I'm happy to read that the visual language worked :).

When the alien wants something you don't have, it can indeed feel frustrating. On the other hand, I kind of like the idea that it might make the player craft stars in advance, when they see squares :). Just stocking up might not be that fun though, right. And you are also right with the waiting, which I at least tried to kind of shorten when you're in space.

Good points, thank you :)!

Submitted(+1)

The stocking up could definitely be a fun, if it was kept as something that gave multitasking an upper hand. However making it be the only way to get through some planets can feel a little unfair. So by making it an optional advantage, instead of a necessary solution, I think you'd get the most out of it!

Submitted(+1)

Very fun and tense game.

Developer(+1)

Thank you :)!

Submitted(+1)

This was really fun! Okay also some parts were a little frustrating like the what the merchant wanted (not having water was a bummer) but I don't think it would be satisfying without it. Also given the game length the difficulty gave it a bit of a roguelike feel that made we want to do another run "this time I'll save a star in case theres no water".  On my third attempt I was able to finish and I was pleasantly surprised at the extra fuel turning into flowers. 

Gameplay-wise the crafting was simple but the time constraint + physics move made it fun and I'm really glad you had slightly different mechanics for the different shapes. I'm not much for 'clicker' games so having the circles be time-gated and water 'expire' instead was a great choice in my opinion.

I realized there were harder difficulties so I may have to come back and try it again.

Developer

Woah, thank you so much for all the wonderful feedback :)! Super glad you liked the game :)!

Submitted(+1)

*alien noises*

Submitted(+1)

Surprisingly loads of fun once you get a hang of it. The aesthetics are fairly simple but the game play and mechanics are there. It's actually really fleshed out considering how little time you had. 

Nicely done, :D!

Developer(+1)

Thank you :D! I'm very glad you enjoyed it! I actually played your game already, I dig the 3D models :), they look great!

Submitted(+1)

Thanks, ^.^

Submitted(+1)

I love the creafting it was awsome, its a little repetitive in the last but its an awsome game 

Developer

Thank you :)!

Submitted(+1)

Not going to lie....that took me way longer than I like to admit to figure out what I needed to do haha. I liked it though. Once I figured out what I needed to do I really got into it. Made it to the 2nd last planet.  May have to come back and give it another go.   Really liked the crafting. :)

Developer

Thank you for the comment :)! Indeed a lot of people don't get what to do in the beginning :(. But they usually realize how to play soon, so I chose to rather not include an actual proper tutorial, but rather use some icons, glow or other things to guide the player. I hope noone gets stuck. Thanks for the patience with the game :), glad you liked it in the end!

Submitted(+1)

This is awesome! Really great concept and well executed - the difficulty options were a welcome touch as well. I thought the differences in the way the resources can be farmed/accumulated was particularly neat.

Developer(+1)

Thanks so much :)! Very glad you enjoyed it!

Submitted(+1)

Nice, a bit stressful but nice! I like the physicsbased inventory

Developer

Thank you :)! Right. I probably should have put in a longer break in between the action. I'm glad you like the physics :). Thanks for the feedback!