Cute graphics, very original.

funny art style, nice work)

Pretty nice game!

Seems like a lots of work is gone into making this a ball pen style. 

I feel it will help to distinguish the walls as it's slightly disorienting. Also adding some sort of compass or wayfinder might help.

Some rooms have messages that were difficult to interpret. Teleporting rooms? 

Excellent game and would sell well once completed!

Cheers from Canada! 

It's hard to immediately understand where the walls are. Maybe the walls should be given a different color. It's hard to navigate, I wish I had a map.

It gives me the feel of old fps game!

Wow, the game's style is so cool ！！！

Great art direction — the hand-drawn style and two-color choice are impressive and bring a lot of authenticity. The movement mechanics enhance the sense of volume and immersion in the environment, but navigation is sometimes confusing due to the minimal design choices; some visual cues on walls or a minimap would help.
Great job!

Interesting game, confused at first but really original. Great job

Cute drawings, still it was difficult orienting myself without a minimap :)

I absolutely LOVE this artstyle. Its just like playing D&D in school during lunchbreak: ballpoint pen on paper. Great.
Also very cool gameplay-mechanics 

Cool! Reminds me a lot of Might & Magic, back in the day.

There are points where a room 2 or 3 steps away would appear to have a wall but was actually open, that caught me a few times. Then ultimately I got lost and gave up. Does the world loop? I tried drawing a map but it ended up overlapping itself.

Showing a minimap or compass might be helpful. But I think the main thing would be to draw floors a little different from walls. Maybe a blue-pen crosshatch pattern or something?

I always find these games with hand-drawn visuals very charming. I also love how you made an almost retro style fps.

great job!

funny) nice art) feels freedom of creativity) 

wow! Is so cool