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Don't Destroy David's Day's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Theme | #206 | 3.685 | 3.685 |
| Enjoyment | #647 | 3.260 | 3.260 |
| Innovation | #1010 | 2.699 | 2.699 |
| Overall | #1044 | 2.763 | 2.763 |
| Audio | #1068 | 2.575 | 2.575 |
| Gameplay | #1206 | 2.425 | 2.425 |
| Visuals | #1688 | 1.932 | 1.932 |
Ranked from 73 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
How does the game fit the theme?
You can't let anything go wrong in his day
What code and assets did you not make from scratch during the jam (if any)?
None
How many people worked on the game?1
Comments
had a lot of fun playing, dont have anything to add thats not in the comments. kinda gives a "Zork" feel.
Interesting writing and I played a few times to discover different endings.
Simple, but very funny writing! Got ending 12 (meany) and ending 10 (sleep) on my first playthroughs. Some things to improve: make the text appear faster/allow the payer to press a button to show all text and skip animation. Probably show the choices *below* the main text instead of above, that's a bit more natural. Overall a neat experience!
Loved it! Being a person with imsomnia I am jealous of David. For some feedback I'd say maybe you could try and make the text generator in such a way that it doesn't jump from one line to another when a word starts at the end of a line.
Loved this one! The concept might be simple, but I really enjoyed exploring the story. I think it is well written, and I laughed at many moments, so you did a great job.
I had a great time getting to know Lucas, the character we play, David, and all the situations we can end up in. Thank you for this refreshing project, nice work!
The concept is awesome and I liked that you added different endings. I always end up going for the "good" one first lol. You could've added some drawings to show together with the text, but overall it's pretty decent. Nice job :)
Really cool game, its very simple!
even tho i wouldve liked some visuals in the backround lol it felt a bit too empty... but it was still very interesting! i got like 5 or 6 endings :)
I really like your game. One little thing I would like to see besides the option to skip text is a glowing of a button if you hover over it. The sound effect is pretty cool but a visual representation of the selected button is missing. Besides that, maybe a deeper text could be cool with a bit more "life" in it? But this would be there if you had more time. So yea, really cool game!




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