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A jam submission

Red Apple FactoryView game page

Submitted by bendux (@bendux_studios) — 1 hour, 49 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Sound#433.8923.892
Creativity#1603.7843.784
Visuals#2123.6763.676
Fun#2523.4323.432
WOWIE!#2553.2973.297
Simplicity#3483.6763.676
Topic#4813.0003.000

Ranked from 37 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Submitted

Well done! It's a nice game with some meaning in it. Some critique:

  • There must be a sound for picking an apple in the box - sometimes I came back with an apple still in my pocket because I didn't notice I hadn't put the apple
  • You should add some visual hint for when the player is in range to interact with something, e.g. for picking up an apple or when you are close enough to the surprise box
  • The music is fun but feels a bit odd. On the other side, I myself cannot really imagine what music would fit this game.

Nicely done!

Developer

Thank you for your feedback! I'm going to implement your ideas after the game jam!

I tried to create a melody that sounds like an old man's whistling while working. :D

Submitted

This was really fun to play! I love the multitasking between bringing apples to the gift box and putting new ones in the trash. Made it to 60 apples gathered :)

Developer(+1)

Thanks! Congratulations! :D

Submitted

Pretty fun mechanic! Had yellow apples stacked to the sky. I think what might make this even more fun is if the stack of apples could only reach a certain height, so for timing, you'd have to choose whether to gift the apple (gives you points) or give it to dog (no points, but keeps the round from ending... maybe the dog gets fat). That was the first thing that came to mind. Anyway, I liked it, good job!

Developer

Thank you! That's actually a pretty good idea!

Wow, great game! As others said, it took me a while to understand that I need to jump over the dog and press E (right mouse button) under the gift. But then it became good fun! It was hard to keep track of the falling apples and control the character as well, but that is a positive thing in this game! I love the music as well. Good job.

Developer

Thanks! Yes, I agree with you!

Submitted

Heyho! I needed a while to understand it fully, but then, it was a very charming little game - had fun playing it! Maybe for next time, you could consider an ingame tutorial, this would smooth up the initial experience quite a bit.
Well done! Stay funky,
Dez

Developer(+1)

Yes, good idea! Thank you!

Submitted

I really like this game! Your interpretation of the theme is really wholesome and the atmosphere is very soothing. The art is great and the gameplay is pretty simple to understand. Multitasking is a great idea and it was pretty challenging, but it was never frustrating. I don't know if this was because you coded it this way or I got lucky, but I think my golden apples kind of spawned in waves, which if you did code, is so incredibly clever. I think it would've been infinitely more frustrating if it was just constant apples, especially considering the travel time. I think the only thing is as you get further into the game, apples were falling faster, and my character could only move so fast so I couldn't keep up. I don't really know of a fix, but maybe you could add a powerup or something that allows you to carry more than one apple for some amount of time? Either way, this game was really fun and felt really polished. Great job! Oh, and my high score was 45.

Developer

Thanks for your feedback! I really like your ideas!

Submitted

Hey! I have some feedback for your game:

- On your next games, try making it more clear what I should do. Took me about 5 minutes to figure it out, even with a "tutorial".

- After you initially go to the present box moving becomes pretty much pointless. Maybe add something else to do?

- It feels unfair getting 2 or more yellow apples in a row. I recommend adding a variable that makes it impossible to get 2 yellow apples in a row. Say there is a 1/5 chance apples become yellow. Store the variable after you got the random number, if it is the same twice ( and that number is the yellow apple one ), get another random number.

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Developer(+1)

Thank you for your honest feedback! I appreciate it!

Submitted

Charming little game! I like the multitasking, It would be great if the right side area changing somehow to put more challenge. 

Developer

Thanks! Good idea!

Submitted

Thanks for the tutorial ! Little funny game. It need skill ! Good job. Lovely design and sound design. Well done.

Developer

Thank you very much!

Submitted

Took a bit to figure out what to do,  but after that, it was very fun

 Great job!

Developer

Thanks!

Submitted

Overall I enjoyed the game. I like how the music helps calm you in an otherwise stressful game. Could use a cap to the number of apples you can hold at once and the tutorial could be a bit clearer. The hardest part was figuring it out, but once you figure it out it's pretty fun!

Developer

Yes, I have to work on that in the future! Thanks!

Submitted

Nice casual game. move frank gets a little tedious. but very fun over all.

Developer

Thank you!

Submitted

This is such a unique game! A bit confusing at first, but I had a lot of fun with it once I realized how to play.

Developer

Thanks!

Submitted

I think the interpretation is quite interesting. In any case, a nice variation. Maybe you should add a maximum limit of yellow apples, it got a bit weird at about 50 :)

Developer

Thank you! Yes, I know what you mean! :D

Submitted

Such an interesting idea of managing two things at once! The story about a factory that paints apples is just hilarious, too. :D

Developer

Thanks! :D

Submitted

At the beginning of the game, I was pretty confused. After I learnt the main idea and concept of the game, it was really fun! Wowiiiie!

Developer

Thank you!

Submitted

good game with nice music and visuals, it could've been better if there are different levels tho

Developer(+1)

Thanks!

Submitted

I enjoyed the concept and gameplay! Nice Work!

Feel free to drop by and rate my game!

Developer

Thank you!

Submitted

Really good game, the idea is simple and easy to understand, after some time i was able to deliver the apples while stacking them with the mouse.

Developer

Thanks! Good job!

Submitted

Very nice looking game. I was surprised that the yellow apples would just stack indefinitely, I was expecting the stack to collapse any time.

Developer

Thank you! :D

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