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I'll give you honest feedback!

A topic by flavedogame created 93 days ago Views: 233 Replies: 22
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Although this jam does not have a rank, I still hope if more people would play our game and have honest feedback about our work, and I'll give you honest feedback too! Let's support each other!

https://flavedogame.itch.io/spring


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Update: I just completed the tutorial, it's a lot of fun. There is a learning curve on where to place things to make the garden more optimal. I really like that. And clicking on the bird was a funny surprise. Now I'm going for a lemon tree!

I'm happy to check out your game. Here is mine: https://itch.io/jam/great-spring-game-jam-2021/rate/965057

It's a very rough beta so there is a lot unpolished with it. Hopefully try to overlook that stuff lol.

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seriously you made a mmorpg for a game jam??? that insane lol! looks awesome!

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W H A T

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I will check out your games as well. Here is my game: https://fawntune.itch.io/flower-shower This is my first game jam, and the game has a tiny scope, but I tried my best!

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commented! A very cute game! Thanks for playing my game too!

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just saw this post, looks really helpful. I also got your game. I'll let you know when i play it.

Here's my game:

This was my first game jam and my 2nd game

https://itch.io/jam/great-spring-game-jam-2021/rate/964722

Its an adventure-puzzle topdown game. Its kinda raw cuz i used a new game engine. Gameplay might be a little hard cuz its my style.

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played. I like the genre and that you have limited time. And yeah it hard as hell... but I think(sorry it is honest feedback) hard is not the excuse to everything, there are still some places need to improve that make it hard but still interesting and I want to keep trying, not hard that I want to quit lol

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thanks for the sweet feedback. I'm still learning to improve the bugs and some of the object collisions. I'll be playing your game today and will share the feedback in its comments.

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I just finished the tutorial and I really liked it, I played it for half an hour! I'm not going to write my feedback here, I'll write it on you game's page! I hope you'll like mine a fraction of how much I liked yours!

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I played and commented all the browser games, and will playing the downloadable ones eventuallly on my PC. 
I've submitted my second game ever, this time with a teammate that worked on all the sprites with me doing the coding. 
Hope to hear great feedback! https://itch.io/jam/great-spring-game-jam-2021/rate/942474

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I didn't see your comment on my browser game. Is it not showing up? This is my first game and first game jam, so I'm not sure if it's normal for me to not have anyone else play my game. Any advice super appreciated! Also, I will be checking out your game now.

Here is the link to my game.

https://gansogames.itch.io/find-the-light

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I didn't mean ALL browser games. Just the ones on this thread for now. Great game you made though! I've commented it now.

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done I like tower defense game!

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I love the art and the tone, I've completed the tutorial, I'll drop later to play. Is it hand drawn?

https://moonkey-lab.itch.io/cycle-song here's mine it's kinda unplayble on the web version, the downloadable one works much smoother

Submitted

Hmm sorry to say that but it feels like an unfinished game, might because of the time limit? I like the idea and art of the game but might need some improvement in gameplay XD

And yes our game is hand-drawn!

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I get what are you saying I uploaded the wrong version, the last event completely cut off, working now.

Unlocked the 3rd garden very well done, rounded and colorful the only gripe I had was with the plants in the right corner when they produce it get under the explanation pop up and don't let me pick up the materials, it's not all the right angle just a tiny fraction

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I like this idea. Ranking would have been cool in the jam, but this works too.
Feedback: Your game is awesome after you get the hang of the objective. The mix of a growth and clicker game together played well. The menu items were a bit intrusive as they tended to occupy a good part of the screen. Your gameplay mechanic is very clear and may not require constant feedback on the screen, or even guidance. I would suggest for a game like this, you had a 'show tips' button to disable the menus from popping up.

If you care to check it out. My team made a speedrun game. It is a 3d platformer with a speedrun timer.  EDEN is the game, and it is available for PC.

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done! I like it but it might be better to be an explore/puzzle game than a speedrunning game, but it could be me liking slow pace games more lol.

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I commented on your game. 

My game is a metroidvaniaish game. You can get upgrades to finish the game. You need to get the keys to win. (Click the submitted button to play my game)

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I plan on playing some tonight, I will check out yours then. If you have the chance, here is mine:

https://thesyxan.itch.io/a-mundane-spring

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I will play your game, here is mine: https://jublingo.itch.io/guardian-of-the-forgotten-garden 

It is my first game jam, appreciate any feedback :)

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Interesting idea and definitely a success for a first game jam!