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A jam submission

Journey of a Black HoleView game page

The Sun wants to become a Black Hole, this is every star dream.. Will you help him?
Submitted by ejsergi — 20 hours, 48 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Theme#803.8163.816
Fun#893.5923.592
Game Design#923.6333.633
Overall#963.5343.534
Audio#1073.3673.367
Graphics#1313.6333.633
Innovation#1983.1633.163

Ranked from 49 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Submitted

Reminds me of the game Agar.io, It did feel a bit slow at the start and I would have liked a faster move speed by default or alternatively more smaller stars. Apart from that I really enjoyed playing this game for a few minutes or so :)

Submitted

Pretty fun arcade game. I'm a big fan of the bloom usage. I think you should be a bit faster but otherwise it's great. Be sure to give my game a try too :)

Submitted

Very nice game! A little improvement and the game would be great.I enjoyed playing it. All the best and Good luck! Do check out our game we need the feedback! - https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-3/rate/574293

Submitted

Interesting idea and smooth/fun controls.  I like your parallax star background and the flash when you grow.  Cool ending shot into the black hole too!  Great job!  Please check out my game if you haven't.

Submitted

I like the audio and the idea is interesting but it get's boring after a while. I would add some more particles to make it more juicy besides that very cool game :P

Submitted

I get your back buddy! If we rate all who have lower ratings then we might even get better ratings so start rating most of the least rated games as I'm doing ;) and your game is kinda awesome , cool ,or amazing, keep up the good work and rate me please

Submitted

[SUMMARY] 📊

Journey of a Black Hole is an agar.io inspired game and a nice entry to the Brackeys Game Jam.

I did not reach the win state, because I have more reviews to write and I got stuck when my star was big enough to be eaten by red rogue stars.

[GAME DESIGN] 🎲

  • The Good: Good premise, it works and it's intuitive to learn. The light speed mechanic is good.
  • The Bad: There are some rogue red stars that kill you instantly even on the easiest difficuly setting.
  • My AdviceBalance and playtest early! Everytime you can, build and send the game to family and friends (or the game jam discord) and gather their feedback. Build often!

[FUN] 🤣

  • The Good: Satisfying to see your star grow!
  • The Bad: A bit boring at the start.
  • My Advice: Same as above!

[INNOVATION] 💡

  • The Good: A star that moves and the years count on the bottom left are very original ideas!
  • The Bad: A bit derivative. Too similar to agar.io.
  • My Advice: Try and make your game yours! Twist the mechanics a bit.

[THEME]📖

  • The Good: A black hole! What else can I say?
  • The Bad: -
  • My Advice: Maybe don't go with the obvious. An original approach to the theme can help you on Game Design as well as on the Innovation category.

[GRAPHICS]🎨

  • The Good: Consistent and well done. Nice menus!
  • The Bad: Could use some more polish!
  • My Advice: You can modify Post Processing on runtime to achieve cool effects!

[AUDIO]🔊

[FINAL RATING]  🥇

Overall, a good entry to the jam. Good theme use and nice graphics. The Innovation and Fun could get some love.

6.6 / 10

Review length: 311 Words

Submitted

Good work! A little bit difficult to get used to the movement but in the end the game was fun.

Submitted (2 edits)

Very Cool Concept, the controls are easy and intuitive, 

it is simple yet challenging , Very Nice work !

if would be really nice if you checked out our game and rate it :)

https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-3/rate/574177

Submitted

Amazing job for a first game! I hope you keep learning unity and making games. It's well-presented, fun and a nice premise. Good job!

Submitted

simplistic art style made it more enjoyable , loved your game

Developer

Happy you liked it! :)

Submitted

please check out mine too

Developer

Yes! Played it some time ago, I liked it quite a lot, especially the graphics and sound. Rated already! :)

Submitted

A little confusing at the beginning, but over time it was fun!

Developer

Thanksss!

Submitted

Simple but fun to play, the light speed was slightly unresponsive at times.

Developer

Thank you! :)

Submitted (1 edit)

Simple but really fun to play, also great idea! Very cool ending! Well done!

Developer

Thanks!! :)

Submitted

Wow, I like the transformation of the black hole. The game design it's simple but really fun and the graphics are good. Great job !

Developer

Thanks for your comment! :)

Submitted

Hey, this is a very cool game! It looks like agar.io and it's great. I liked the game design, graphics and sound. Of course, you can refine the schedule, but I think you simply did not have time for this. I believe that this game solves the theme of jam.

Developer(+1)

Thank you Maribor for your comment!

Submitted

AH I love games like this, but this is so much more detailed !  Sometimes I wasnt sure if I was bigger or smaller than other things, but I loved everything else about it!

Developer

Yes.. sometimes is difficult to distinguish, this definitely is improvable!

Thanks for your feedback! :)

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