| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Originality | #858 | 3.619 | 3.619 |
| Fun | #1765 | 2.905 | 2.905 |
| Overall | #1801 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
| Presentation | #2989 | 2.619 | 2.619 |
Ranked from 21 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
How does your game fit the theme?
the players movements have a lack of control and depending on their actions randomised events may occur
Did your team create the art for this game during the 48 hour time slot?
We created all art during the game jam
Did your team create the audio for this game during the 48 hour time slot?
We used pre-existing audio
I really like this game! It's a simple concept that is well executed. I enjoy the puzzles and how you have to break them to progress.
I enjoyed how things started to switch around and a deeper story would become uncovered. This game has tons of potential and it's kinda a shame it has little recognition.
Overall fun project! I hope you continue to build on it and good luck with you future game dev!
This game is weird in an interesting way. I kinda like that it "breaks" if you don't adhere to "proper" puzzles. I like that one impossible to do "properly" level.
I think that graphics and storytelling could use a bit more work, but it's a good first try. Great job!
Once it's more clear what your goals are, I think it's a cool idea to have the levels change around once you're part way through them! Definitely has a mysterious vibe where you're trying to figure out how everything works, but by the time I'd beaten it I'm still not sure I know.
Ok, if t's a real project, i'll get further into my feedback
- i had trouble understanding the color code, if i remember correctly, it was written that green was heal but some green things reset the lvl
- maybe use more differents shapes than squares. Like, a flag for the goal, to always know what is what.
- both the dialogs and the goal get you to the next lvl i think so i don't see the point having both in a lvl (but you told there were different endings so maybe it's for that)
- during the dialogs please go to the line each time someone has finished to speak. It'll be more pleasant for the eyes.
- for the life bar, write it's the life bar, or else we just see another square on the screen.
- i didn't understand the mechanic that make things move everywhere. Like, you go out of the path and then it moves ? That's strange.
Thanks for the feedback however, all of the green resets you actually, it just depends on if you are at full health or not, being at full health and attempting to immediately gain health will just reset the player as does death.
Also the press space is the object that would send the player to the next room, not including these in every room may also give the impression that there was nothing after that room.
Yeah i completely agree with the dialogue being on different lines however i was using the same canvas for the dialogue in a sprite maker so i would need to resize it which may make it stretch strangely.
yeah the life bar did look a little off after finishing it but if you were able to recognise its a life bar after taking damage then it does its job.I will get to fixing it though.
Hitting the edge of the screen is actually the trigger for making everything start to move. It allows the player to not only get hit by the blue at almost any time but also gives them access to the yellow in some rooms.
One more thing in your last message you said there was a room that sends you back to a certain level, can you be more specific about that? i'm going through testing the game now and cant seem to find it, but you are not the only person who has complained about it so i want to fix it.
This was really impressive for a first project! I think you have some good ideas, and it's also impressive that you're including a story right off the bat! I did have some trouble figuring out what was going on, but it was definitely interesting.
Kind of reminds of those games I used to play on my phone, though a little different since I'm only moving one block. Loved the puzzles though! Great game!
Surely an interesting little game, glad I went through and played it fully :)
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