hiya, here are some stray notes i took while reading this one!
before i get into the doc itself, just mentioning that the product page is great -- my layout designer told me to make sure i pointed this out, as it was one of the ones she looked at when she was working on our product page.
doc itself i have similar praise. laid out excellently, easy on the eyes, easy to find what i'm looking for at a quick glance.
i don't think the kronos tunneler has enough health/wounds. ;) no but for real, love the image of this thing. feels really novel.
the ai broadcast line written on bridge nexus location is fantastic. and in system deviations. i'd read an entire page of these things given the opportunity.
all in all a great interpretation of the theme of the jam. system deviations all feel appropriately different from each other, and still on theme -- really reinforcing the nature of the corrupted beast.
really enjoyed this one -- great work!
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