I'm gonna project this on my screen while we play
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Thank you for your review. More jam contestants told me they feel the same way about the linearity of the module, I need to give it s thought how to write "how we play it". In my circle, we use this kind of writing among ourselves to know the story points we need to reach, but they could happen in different places, paces, NPCs could change, etc. It's more like "at some point , something like this should happen". I hope I'll find a way to convey it better when I make redux versions of my two trifolds.
Glad you liked the genrebashing and art :)
Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm very happy the space mafia slang was understandable:D
G'Sliit is present in all my home games , we have cultures about the planet and whatnot. I want to write and draw a few things this year with G'Sliit NPCs, please stay tuned! The redux versions of this trifolds too
Thanks again :)
That's a super fair point, in my head the "it seems like we're exploring/oh no Doris talks and she bad" was clear, but it's easy to get lost on your own text and miss if things need to be less or more subtle.
Hopefully I'll have a nice redux module after the jam and I'll take this point in much consideration:)
Thanks
Thank you for your review Joshua. La Laguna is vague on purpose (it's a big place I'm saving for another supplement), but I guess I should have pointed a few of its floors better, and why do they have sunlight like other comment pointed. I actually do plan on revisiting the module (a redux version, I guess) after the jam, would love to chat over your opinions if you have time. Discord is fine?
This is an awesome review. Thank you for this (the community is amazing you all are frankly giving me so much energy). I'm happy I hit some of the points I wanted to reach aesthetically (visually or otherwise) and "sad" that I didn't land the demon feel and race rules, but really hyped to rework it after the jam and polish it well.
Thank you again for your time and analysis and thoughts :D





