Tengo el juego "acabado" (me faltan cosas por rellenar, pero está la maquetación de todo y la planificación y etc). Si todo va bien debería estar sacando campaña de Ks y estas reglas de inicio antes que acabe el mes
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Por gustar me gusta más flat, pero he tenido todo. Ahora mismo tengo unos xsjado freestyle para trucos pero ya pocos trucos me quedan, y unos twister para pasear. He tenido de todo, en los 90 también me hice lo de quitar ruedas (como no había internet iba con tres, con lo cual el Groove lo tenía torcido jajaja) . Mi primer soulplate ya fue en los dosmiles con unos USD. He tenido de casi todo pero mi preferido son los antiguos Valo y los Xsjado. Si me sobrase el dinero me compraría Roces viejos por coleccionar.
Thank you for your review. More jam contestants told me they feel the same way about the linearity of the module, I need to give it s thought how to write "how we play it". In my circle, we use this kind of writing among ourselves to know the story points we need to reach, but they could happen in different places, paces, NPCs could change, etc. It's more like "at some point , something like this should happen". I hope I'll find a way to convey it better when I make redux versions of my two trifolds.
Glad you liked the genrebashing and art :)
Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm very happy the space mafia slang was understandable:D
G'Sliit is present in all my home games , we have cultures about the planet and whatnot. I want to write and draw a few things this year with G'Sliit NPCs, please stay tuned! The redux versions of this trifolds too
Thanks again :)
That's a super fair point, in my head the "it seems like we're exploring/oh no Doris talks and she bad" was clear, but it's easy to get lost on your own text and miss if things need to be less or more subtle.
Hopefully I'll have a nice redux module after the jam and I'll take this point in much consideration:)
Thanks
Thank you for your review Joshua. La Laguna is vague on purpose (it's a big place I'm saving for another supplement), but I guess I should have pointed a few of its floors better, and why do they have sunlight like other comment pointed. I actually do plan on revisiting the module (a redux version, I guess) after the jam, would love to chat over your opinions if you have time. Discord is fine?
This is an awesome review. Thank you for this (the community is amazing you all are frankly giving me so much energy). I'm happy I hit some of the points I wanted to reach aesthetically (visually or otherwise) and "sad" that I didn't land the demon feel and race rules, but really hyped to rework it after the jam and polish it well.
Thank you again for your time and analysis and thoughts :D
(illegal) racing in one-person small ships is gonna be a a theme in a big supplement I want to do, but I have yet to decide a lot of stuff (like maybe making an specific skill tree for it instead of using regular piloting). I even have a sketch for a ship that you can print and fold and glue as a token if someone wants to draw a race board. I didn't want to give it much rules in this module because I wouldn't have the space and honestly I wasn't sure I would be able to without testing and whatnot.
Thanks for reading thru it :) see you in a couple months when I have longer stuff to show
Thank you for such a curated comment. Glad you like the vibe :D I wasn't sure the talkin murder ecoterrorist dolphin would work.
Could you point the grammar problems to me in a DM please? English is not my first language so I probably wouldn't notice them even if I try. I should had tested the module tbh (I just wrote it) and that would have made me notice that indeed I should give more info of the whole crew/ship , the alien ambassador, etc. PDFs are weird, in my phone it zooms perfect, in my computer sometimes the lettering goes very bold and the portraits blur :/ I'm thinking of printing it after the jam _and scan it_ so it looks pixel perfect (and analogic!).
Thanks again for taking time in such a detailed comment and reading the module :)






