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I read through you jam entry. Here's my written commentary on your adventure content and layout:

---Very straightforward adventure frame and hook, easy to run

---Good, simple visuals. Easy to read

---System Deviations - 10 minutes of real time is quite quick, and in an hours time you have a 50% chance of getting a double with only 10 entries.

---Kronos Tunneler could probably use stats from Shipbreakers Toolkit

---Great dungeon crawl, well laid out, something happening in each room

Thanks for the feedback! Shipbreakers Toolkit isn't a bad idea at all!